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July 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD It's amazing!!!!!!!!!!!!
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October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
0.0 Alcogel? That evaporates very quickly and would definitely leave a burning sensation considering the alcohol content. Seriously, Watanuki should have some lotion laying around or as a last resort he *has* to have cooking oil.
Even so, this is a fairly hot piece of work and I love Doumeki 'topping from the bottom' as it were. The best parts are when Doumeki's being tender and sexually arousing Watanuki.
"Doumeki pressing Watanuki's right hip down and outward until it lay flat against the futon, then hooking the boy's left leg over his shoulder to get a better angle."
-that was a very good bit, conveyed the imagery very well. The climax was quite good too.
Even so, this is a fairly hot piece of work and I love Doumeki 'topping from the bottom' as it were. The best parts are when Doumeki's being tender and sexually arousing Watanuki.
"Doumeki pressing Watanuki's right hip down and outward until it lay flat against the futon, then hooking the boy's left leg over his shoulder to get a better angle."
-that was a very good bit, conveyed the imagery very well. The climax was quite good too.
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August 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
absolute love! you got their personalities and everything perfect! i love wonderful spazy watanuki and a Doumeki that isn't as boring as a rock. beautiful. you wrote a great lemon there and i hope you write more!
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August 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
such a creative little plot and a wonderful way with words too! i loved how you analogied (is that a word?) doumeki's voice to chocolate, it completely made me melt with glee. it's been too long since this category got a new contribution, and this a was more than welcome addition; it definitely didn't disappoint!