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ok... couple things

you are not very well acquainted with the Japaneses version of cardcaptor sakura.
do yourself a favor and youtube cardcaptor episodes. you'll find that sakura's name is sakura kinomoto, not avalon. you spelt 'syaoran' shoaran... or something close to that.

i think if you were to start using the original names instead of the retarded americanized versions, then your story would be more popular...

all my love
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