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It's a huge pity you didn't update, this would have been fascinating to read.

That was great!!! I never could image the twins being apart. But I wonder, whats gonna happen when there apart?
Super Points for you!

I was so choked up! It was so sad :( I hope that they can somehow overcome it. I'm looking forward to the upcoming chapters

this is beautiful! i certainly hope you write more! you're so talented!

omg that was so sad and very good i hope to read more soon.

OmG! This made me bawl my eyes out! I haven't cried during a fic, much less a one-shot, in a very long time. It was beautiful and poignant. Truly. I'd love to read more of this story! (even if I feel emotinoally mangled afterwards ^^; [daijobudesuyo! hontouni])

I can't wait for you to update! I really don't think that you went overboard on Hikarus reaction. Considering their seperate personalities, I think you pegged them perfectly.

Oh wow! That was so good! So beautifully written, so sad and so touching... Hope you update soon =D

Wow, that was.. so romantic!! *cries* Twincest as its most romantic!! =O I hope you update soon =]

omt, sk, i loooove this fic you're starting!! the whole idea for it, and just.. ohh, i'm excited for it! and the first chapter, you know many of the parts i loved already, but i just want to say again: loved kaoru waking up to a warm feeling below his navel and hikaru suckling his love :p teared up for... well, basically, everything involving them being separated *sob* especially when kaoru tried to cheer hikaru up by saying at least he'd get the bed to himself, and he could find himself, and being seen as an individual since wasn't that the point of the "which one's hikaru?" game, etc. (and hikaru's responses *sobsob*) and this: We laughed for what seemed like an hour, and I only tell you this because it is the last time I remember laughing like that with my brother.

of course, even with the sadness you managed to have cute/funny moments in there, like the line about "one sister who until the end of last year, was disguised as a brother, and one insane fan-girl disguised as a manager" heeheeheeeeee and, of course, the hideous school uniform lmao!!

but then, ohhh, their last night together! firstly, i want to tell you how much i love the way you write them, all the simple yet deep interaction between them, their deep twin connection letting them know what the other needs and how to give it and how the simplest of touches between them feels so meaningful in the scheme of things... and then, on to their actual last night.. and hikaru telling kaoru to fuck him.. you know already that i was like O.o whoa, even though i was kinda expecting that "change up" it was still like O.o but in a good way. and it was just so.... sweet and loving and sad at the same time... a night that will no doubt give them both bouts of melancholy nostalgia as the school year drags on

waaaah and the shirt grabbing sobbing goodbye.. and kaoru wishing hikaru didn't have to break down, not letting himself cry in front of him and make it worse *waaaaaaahsnifflesob*

so good, dude! write more now!! i love it, i love them, i love you, you rock my sockssssss

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~ lg!!