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August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oioioi, you're sometimes annoying, but I still love you. Anyways...
Liked the story. Can't say it's totally perfect--though the sex fit and all that stuff. Glad I remember fromthe anime, else I wouldn't be any good to state things. Unique switching of rolls for the final part, that was great to read. But normally in sex, words can't always be processed by mind--especially if it was so enthralling to both parties. Got told that by an old friend of mine from my first sex story--now I'm going into more and more of them. Keep writing, and I hope that you do continue this; this is enough to actually want me to read more. ((And coming from Ero-Daisuke, that's saying a lot, since I usually read stories like this to...))
~Kitsune, you're resident Foxy Rokudaime.
Liked the story. Can't say it's totally perfect--though the sex fit and all that stuff. Glad I remember fromthe anime, else I wouldn't be any good to state things. Unique switching of rolls for the final part, that was great to read. But normally in sex, words can't always be processed by mind--especially if it was so enthralling to both parties. Got told that by an old friend of mine from my first sex story--now I'm going into more and more of them. Keep writing, and I hope that you do continue this; this is enough to actually want me to read more. ((And coming from Ero-Daisuke, that's saying a lot, since I usually read stories like this to...))
~Kitsune, you're resident Foxy Rokudaime.
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August 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
aww poor kaoru and hikaru i feel so bad for them. I can understand the pain i mean they have lived their whole lives together and having to face being seperated with one sentence...thats too much. i hope things work out.