rate_review Reviews

A great way to come to. Love it. Thank you!

(I didn't rate your story by the way). I think you have potential here as a writer. Your sex ideas are good. The story has a lot of grammar problems, however, which makes it hard to read. Some of the lines are rather trite or "overused" lines. You might want to read a lot of lemons and then revise this to try to better capture your mental vision. A beta also could help. You seem very creative, however, so don't stop writing!