rate_review Reviews

Insteresting story.

I don't know if it's intentional or not, but Chapter 11 is the same as Chapter 10...

Wow...I must say, I am astounded by this story. L's character is magnificent - somewhat somber and, as you said before, dominating (the accents on those traits are awesome), and Raito's reaction to L's manipulations are very plausible (I mean, anyone who's being pushed to a confession to the point of insanity is probably going to act the part); and of course, the twisted relations between them are well portrayed. TO add to that, you style of writing is very elaborate and convincing. I'm aching to see if Raito'll succeed in falling off the building (EEPPPP!!!) and how L will handle (or not) the situation. Please keep writing!

~Zena

that's the ending! ahhh!!! okay, done. Great story though! It was tough to read at times because of the heavy subject matter, but the ending felt like it really brought everything to a good climax and it felt resolved in a strange way. Hope to see more from you, you've got a talent here, don't let it rust. ^_^

OH MY GOD!!! THIS IS JUST PERFECT!
I love how the events turn out!
I though, till last moment he would jump, commit suicide but no. You surprise me so much, gosh, now L will have doubts, yeah, good for him! after all he did to Light! this story is one of my favorites! what to know how thing will end.
BTW I also think that L was so much after Kira cause he would be unemployed ^^

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! Light-kun! Update soon please, what a cruel cliffie:( (Great chappie:)

How beautiful is this? Hot sex scenes bordering on N/C, drama, angst... The new chapter made me tear up a little. Eyepatch Raito FTW. ^_^

hmm, i enjoy this piece, even if it gets a bit confusing at times. but you probably mean it to be for the sake of mystery. ^_^ I like how you protray the distress and uncertaintly in L and Lights ...relationship? It's true to the characters, though I must agree with the other reviewer that the sex scenes, while hot, border on rape. It's realistic to the plot though. I hope there's a happy ending in sight, but your portrayal of Light's growing insanity makes me worry! lol. Very interesting and different, I like this story a lot and hope to see you continue with it to finish.

OMG This is going in more and more interesting directin. I'm wondering will Light give into fact he's Kira or will he denai it and what he will do, will there be a tragedy.
I love the idea of smart Misa who just act.
pleas update soon, I'm dieing XD to know how this will end!

GAH! Don't tell him that Misa. Jeez...that's not going to help Light's psych any...Oh well, I think I might like this version better. Of course this one has one more chapter then the one on FF.net....I think...Last I saw it was only to 8 but I might be mistaken. Anyways keep up the good work! I love it!

see I said I'd review! ^^