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I'm confused... damn L really messed up Light's mind. it's like Kira awaken deeply inside Light not caused by Death Note but by L's uncontrollable lust for Light. looks like we will have tragedy ahead bigger than self-inflicted wound. I adore You story, pleas update as soon as possible. I doubt it'll have happy ending but still want to know it.

Excellent new chappie:)I bet that figure in the corner was Ryuku(sp?) tormenting Raito/Light again:3 Keep up the great work!

Awesome story, I love it:) Please update soon, I'm dying to find out what happens! (I made an account specifically to review this story:3) *You might get more reviews if you let anonymous readers review, you don't have to let them but stories that enable anonymous reviews tend to get more reviews overall *

Great story! Dark and fascinated. Please update soon :))

whoa, this was creepy and scar and AWESOME. Light behavior in on age of sanity if not he's already insane. You show it really great. moment when he tried to blind himself gave me a thrill. I want MOAR, what should I do to get is sooner ^^.

ps. one little mistake. You're switching from Raito to Light all the time.

not my first review but the longest it'll be.
first that got my attention was summary. 'hm...' I thought, 'this might be interesting.' normally I'm not starting reading stories in progress since some authors has annoying propensity to abandon not finished stories. but I gave it a try. don't know why.
second chapter was great. Light fit and L admitting that he was afraid. and the last sentence of L in the end. than I was getting better and better. You did great job showing Light emotion from anger, fear to complete indifference when L was raping him (honestly, it was rape). I'm really looking foreword to continuation and hope to read it soon.
keep it up. great story.