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by Moonchild10

person Kerstin
schedule October 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hate this one! I hate it when things make me cry and here I betray myself with this review. If I really would hate it I would never have pressed the button to review.
It still makes me cry because of its softness and gentle loving however ending in death and parting.
Well done even if I will probably never read it again but put it into my favorites anyway.
person A
schedule July 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
How.... could... you!?

*cries for EVER*
schedule April 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM

This is beautiful and sad. It's so deep, that I am rendered pretty speechless. I can't think of what more to say other than...amazing.
person Yuki
schedule November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
everything you write is amazing, this one made me cry. its beautiful and your language painta a beautiful picture in my mind.
person Niongi
schedule October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I hate you all your stories make me cry. Such wonderful tear jerkers, thank you. *sniffle* WAHHH!!! SOUBI! Sorry had to get that out. Thank you for that...touching story. Maybe try for a sad, but happy ending on the next few stories? Lovies! And good luck writing.
person Hidden Lady
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was lovely. I thought I was going to cry at the end, but not because I was sad. You have a way with words that can be hard to find. Thank you so much for writing.
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow. So sad, but sweet. Man oh man you do write beautifully(I said that,somewhere,before,didn't I?). Thanks for writing.
person lordoberon
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM

This fic is making me cry. But it's so sweet! I love how you made the piercing even more bonding. Gosh, words can't say how much I loved this...a very sweet, sad fic.
person jenni penni
schedule September 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
He DIED? That's what I get for not reading the warnings...man, I'm depressed now. A good story though. And I'm glad that someone finally captured the Mature Ritsuka, instead of just the innocent one. I'm sad that Soubi is dead (in the universe of this story), but I can agree that is TOTALLY something he would do. Ahh, I wouldn't have read the story had I known there was gonna be a death (that's what I get for being lazy), but I'm glad I read yours. Very...poignant.

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