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Chapter 2 continues the dynamic from chapter 1 and the way you've set the characters up I can't decide who I feel worse for- Hisoka who can't seem to get past his fear and his issues, of Tsuzuki who even in his desperation has the patience of a saint(almost) and who just wants a physical connection with the man he loves. The fact that they are both so sympathetic just proves that you've written them well. I must also say that the fact that Tsuzuki kissed Hijiri has me a bit nervous about what will happen next, but I can't wait to read more and find out. Update soon please!!

Excellent,,, but I would like to know exactly what he is doing?

Oh the angst.... This is a great start to the story.. I can't wait too long for an update- so please hurry!

T__T awww, i feel so sorry for Hisoka...but i know Tsuzuki loves him and will wait...Hisoka just have to see that too...update soon please ^.^

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I like the way you are exploring Hisoka's hesitation from the standpoint of Tsuzuki's overwhelming desire for him as well as the long standing trauma from Muraki. There's a lot of potential to work with here and was certainly worth the read. Thanks for sharing! ~Jade