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for Torn Betwixt Them

by AngieBop

person amoraluv
schedule April 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
it was going good until u stopped to thank everyone with out putting up a story
person Neon C.
schedule April 10, 2009 at 12:00 AM
i really like your story! it totally rules! Please put a new one up soon. *Begs you* Its so totally awesome! i want to know what happens next!
person Elizabeth
schedule April 9, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I love this story (Harrah, lemony freshness!), so I hope you will write more soon! It's at such a cliffhanger moment! I mean, as far as I'm concerned, Hikaru's been pinning her against a tree for months! Give them some relief, all mighty author! lol, I sincerely hope you don't leave this story for dead. It would be such a waste! :D
person cagna4
schedule March 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
here's another review to that count. love the story so far though i wish the 6th chapter hadn't ended with such a cliffhanger. hope you update soon.
schedule January 13, 2009 at 12:00 AM
You need to update this soon! I've never been a big KyouyaxHaurhi fan but wow, I must read more KyouyaxHaruhi now.*nod nod* I feel so bad for Hikaru, and those poor chocolates! I like it, its very steamy, most people don't do to good on the sex stuff its either impossible or it just not steamy enough, in my book you hit the money. I will continue to read this one. *gives thumbs up*
person Rei2
schedule January 6, 2009 at 12:00 AM
OMG, That was sexy....Kyouya taking her like that...*fans self*
And now Hikaru is going to take her against a tree....sexy.

But I do feel sorry for Haruhi's situation. And now Hikaru is only making it worse.
Maybe things will work out for her in the end. I wonder where Kaoru is though.
Update soon please?
person Dahlia
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i like it very much, a few typos but other than that it is a good story. please continue it =D
person witchwithfangs
schedule December 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Great as always I love it. I started reading it a while ago now I'm really addicted an update would be loved. Keep it coming, I love that I never know what to expect.
person *hazy*
schedule November 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Oh My God I LOVE your story you must update asap!!
The plot and storyline are wonderful it just grabs
you and sucks you in to whats happening to her.
Keep up the awesome work hopeing for another chapter very soon :)
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
tamaki is being a dick
The twins r being stupid
What next
Koyoya is so hot and sexy
I want attention like that

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