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for Torn Betwixt Them

by AngieBop

person tonz27
schedule November 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I'm a bit disappointed in you.. this was a wonderful fan fic T-T
person shimmer
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmm so Kyoya is now becoming her surrogate big brother or something? Even though he's 'noticed' that she's now much more 'grown up' at least physically?

Now I am wondering what he'd do to the Twins for making her so upset?
person shimmer
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm as annoying as some fic writers are in using some type of blackmail for reviews...

Sometimes I very much can understand Why they do so. You're I can. This site is infamous for non-reviews but tons of hits.

(Doesn't help that non-members Can't review, but that is also understandable for those who just hassle fic writers.)

So she's going to be with the Shadow Prince in some way? Unusual. Usually it's one of the Twins.
person shimmer
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Fan self* Man that was unbelievably HOT!

Who knew the Ice King could be so dammed possessive? Or for the fact he gave away a 'club secret' on the Hosts? Or was it really a secret? Cause even the author mentions she's blind when it comes to romantic feelings towards herself for the most part.

well I don't give two hoots and a holler about others I dammed well Like this chapter! Can't say it enough, it's HOT.
person shimmer
schedule November 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
*Blinks* Oh my Freakn' Lord! He goes all glacier on her? Aww that JERK!

Now that she's second guessing herself on what just happened now Hikaru is going all bulistic himself and going to do something similar? Geez if that DOES happen she's going to leave for sure! I'm sort of hoping Kaoru will show up in time to stop his brother from doing something he'll regret later!

Geez guys and their jealousy! It's the pits.
person shimmer
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Well it's a very interesting start! So she's still with her 'Club Members' in college? That's good! I'm abit surprised they are all still in the same college though. I thought they'd all go in seperate ways for that.... or at least one or two in the same college.

As for who her 'bunk mate' is I'm not really surprised. He would bunk her w/"Mom" wouldn't he? lol
person shimmer
schedule October 31, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm guess the Twin's jealousy is still going strong. Not a very good thing for them. But all friendships go through rough patches at times. Hope they can settle things soon.
person BlueRyuu
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
darnit! and here i thought that there was going to be another chapter! :) well, here's your review! loved it! :D:D and he goes back to being a bastard... woot. so what is Hikaru going to do now hmmm?
person anommie
schedule October 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
that was nice, can't wait till the nxt part KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK
d(*_____*) b
schedule September 19, 2008 at 12:00 AM
dont worry. I will defiantely keep reading this fic.

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