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for Torn Betwixt Them

by AngieBop

person tonz27
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
WHOOT! Wonderful!!! Do more!
^^ Even though you told me what you had planned I still find myself amazed by how you managed to make it so much hotter then I imagened. BRAVO!
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Woo! That was HOT! Your description was sexy, so was the scene, and the ending added an unexpected twist. Thanx for making it nice and rough! But not too rough, which is important. Ha, and that coming from me? But there's a certain time and place for roughness, and yours was perfect. Good job!
schedule November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
bloody awesome!!!! Keep it up! I really got into it.
schedule November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
damn he just takes what he wants dont he. there is something so fucking hot about that
person tonz27
schedule October 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT! MORE! XD
person Gabriella
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey!
Awesome story. can't wait for the next chapter!!
schedule October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hi, sorry for slacking on reading the latest chapter... I've been really fuckin busy. Anyways, I both love and appreciate the bit of roughness you put in there! It's interesting to think of Kyouya as having a crazy possessive side... I always like unique twists in a character's psyche, especially if it involves sadism. ^_^ So keep writing, and also thanx for the flattering mention in your last chapter!
person Sybil
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm really enjoying this story. It is well written, with attention to grammar and form which is wonderful (and often not found in online fanfics) I look forward to reading more (smut included!)
person Pastel
schedule October 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
What a fantastic story. I do hope that Kyouya and Haruhi end up together. He seems like he can handle her better then the other host club members. I also hope that Haruhi gives Hikaru a hard time for what he said to her. He doesn't think at all. Go Kyouya! Update as fast as you can please.
person lkm40
schedule October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
So, what happens next? How dare you leave me in suspense! I have to go to classes and work today! No fair!

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