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by Trinity

schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is so cool; well written, good plot, reaches out and grabs you from the start and has great flow. I really like it a lot.
person JOler
schedule September 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I was going to send an email request to you but since I can't (no email address to send it to ...) I was wondering if you might consider my Raging Hormones bunnie in the challenge section ... see if you can work all four little scenarios together in a chappie type fic pretty please?
person JOler
schedule September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story, though I do feel bad for both Kougaiji and Sanzo. They would make an excellent pair if they weren't forced to be together.

I kinda wonder how Kougaiji would react if Goku and Lirin hit it off (they have soooo much in common that it is easy to imagine). That might be enough to help Sanzo and Kougaiji put aside what happened between them if the two 'kids' got involved .... just a hint of a less violent bunnie for a sequel if you feel up to the challenge.

Overall I adored the fic.

mofaf1

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