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September 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Again, a charming little piece. Families are so hard to deal with sometimes.
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September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well I'd like a little description on the blowjob or whatever was happening there at the end--it isn't clear. I liked the conversation and angst, also the love in the beginning. You have a way of covering so much with so few words! A little more lemon would be nice though!