rate_review Reviews

Oh the tragedy of the unfinished story...

It was a great read and I loved it. Sadly I shall forever wonder if Raito is kidnapped by Travien and experimented on. Or if he ever comes to love the child within him(doubt it), or if he becomes so depressed at his situation he attempts to take his own life? Does L still die? Does Raito get the book back and all his memories? And if he does, how does that effect him and his reaction too the pregnancy?

What happens to Misa? Does she go insane from being locked up for too long?

*sigh* My curiosity shall never be satisfied....

I love this story . I spent the past day and a half reading through it. I love the interaction between Raito and L. But I see you have not updated in quite awhile. Please don't let this story go unfinished. That would be tragic :(

You are amazing. I love this pairing, but I have only come across a handful of fanfictions that held my attention. Yours definitely makes the top 3, and I have read a LOT of them. I cannot wait to read more!!!

Glee! This is truly an awesome fic!
I really do hope to read more soon, though I think the boys have more than enough problems without the insane doctor, or the mystery group!

However, I have this weird feeling the council, may be behind his hunt for the unusual, and Light being taken may put him in contact with the third Kira anywho!

I love this story, and it's surely the only mpreg of its kind that I've been able to find on the Internet. I'd love to see the story completed. Any idea on when this may be? You can send me an e-mail reply, if you wish, to Alexis2269@hotmail.com

Fellow DN MPreg fan,
Alexis

(looking around)

So.... Happy birthday, Author's note? :D

How's Chapter 6 going?

I love your story so much I keep re-reading it, every time hoping you've put up the new chapter 6! Please please please say you won't abandon it!

This story is so wonderful!
Please update soon, I'm waiting with baited breath!
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Wow, this is a great read! For an mpreg, it's really realistic. And seeing Raito being the one knocked-up is thrilling. I like how in-character you keep everyone despite the hard-to-believe situation they're all thrust into. L being insufferable is so undeniably him. I also love the detail and research you've put into it. Looking forward to reading more of this. On fact, I'd love very much to be able to see this to its conclusion.

This is my second story of Death Note that I have read. I didn't know there were any Mpreg...AND IT'S LIGHT HAHAHA....I haven't yet read one where's L is preg...I'm just now getting into Death Note yaoi..I'm glad you write a lot! I saw some other stories of yours I will read ater this...that vampire one...looks good. I write but its Naruto yaoi...

Well hope ch 6 will be out soon?!