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December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story! Can't wait to read the next chapter
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November 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
love it! update soon
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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great plot, great writing, and great sex! ahem i meant i really do like this fic and hope that you will continue writing it to the best of your ability. Already i see that you are a strong writer and would like to see this pattern continue...who am i kidding? please continue! i really like your story line and i think that you bring across your characters very well~_~
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November 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Shit...! is all I can say. What is Light doing?
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh.My.God. I don't know what compelled me to read this... maybe it was because Raito is preggo this time around, but whatever the case I am so not into mpregs... but this, this fic caught my eyes and didn't seem to want to release them. I really, really like it and I kinda feel sorry for poor Raito thinking he has to go this all alone. I am awaiting the talk between him and L!!! You are doing an excellent job so far, keep up the great work!
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November 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Love the new chappie:) If you decide to discontinue posting on ff.net are you still going to post new chappies here? If not can you email updates to me? Please? I love this story so much! I don't want to be left hanging!
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
don't replace Chapter 2! I loved it. I love this fic, its what the Death Note section needs. Keep up the good work ^_^
I did get a little confused at the end of the flashback though, I wasn't sure if it was present tense again or not...
I did get a little confused at the end of the flashback though, I wasn't sure if it was present tense again or not...
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October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I'm waiting for the part L/Raito have THE TALK.
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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hooray! A well-written Death Note mpreg! I really like this, and I hope you plan to continue. I do like the fact that it's Raito who's preggers and not L, although I like both...it's rarely Raito :( It also fits the story very well this way. Great job!
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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE THIS!!! I love this so much more than preg!L fics! It's original, well written, and really interesting! I like how L's terms of endearment switch once he finds out that Raito's the mother(?!) of his baby XD BUT OMG! HE KICKED RAITO IN THE STOMACH!!! And L-kicks are hard! The whole "I would let Raito die for my baby" thing was really scary D: I sooooo want to read more of this! What's gonna happen??? How is the whole birth thing gonna go down? AND WILL THERE BE SECKS?!?!!? [crosses fingers]