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September 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually I liked this story very much. of course it wouldn't hurt to have more sex but... progess with the story in whatever way you want to. ;)
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September 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is really good. I love it.
I bit confused about the Dr. Ramos. Is the reason she doesn't like L is because she thinks L is like Raito’s father? Also Dr. Ramos sound like she might be infatuated, she too overly possessive and wrongly protected of Raito. L/Raito should keep a close eye on her if they plan to see her again.
Can not wait for the next chapter.
I bit confused about the Dr. Ramos. Is the reason she doesn't like L is because she thinks L is like Raito’s father? Also Dr. Ramos sound like she might be infatuated, she too overly possessive and wrongly protected of Raito. L/Raito should keep a close eye on her if they plan to see her again.
Can not wait for the next chapter.
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September 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I didn't think I'd ever say that I like a mpreg fanfic, but..
..I really, really like your fanfiction. It's just.. I don't know, but I love it. xD
You should continue, I'd love to read more.
..I really, really like your fanfiction. It's just.. I don't know, but I love it. xD
You should continue, I'd love to read more.
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I usually hate mpreg, but for some reason I had the urge to click this, I think it was because Light would be the pregnant one, heh. That was written really well, and I liked all the mood swings of Light, those were pretty funny -gigglesnort- Anyways, if you're going to update, I think I'd keep reading this -smile-.
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
more!
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I think you should continue it. I didn't find it dry, it was quite amusing actually.
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Like cool beans! Raito's pregnant! :giggle: continue please!
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September 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
i really liked this story. i always find L as the uke and i hate that cuz i just cant see him as one. so u made my horrible day. lol
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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YES!! Finally, Raito m-preg! Continue this, please, you don't see enough of these...
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September 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Finally a Raito MPreg, I've been looking for one for forever:) Great job on the story I look forward to the next chappie!