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August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aw ist over and now i have to wait for how-long ..?? for an update
so please update soon, really soon okay
so please update soon, really soon okay
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August 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
lol ( registrated quickly)
please update
please update
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February 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this because of mayablackwolf's recommendation, and I must say that I love!!! Please update soon!!!!!
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December 4, 2008 at 12:00 AM
:| Umm, you should definitely credit the doujinshi "L" by Balgus REC (and the Dragonfly group, if you read the scanlation, which I'm inferring you did) for the scene where L and Watari first meet/Watari's criminal background in Ch. 14/13. Saying "I totally made that up" gives the impression that YOU- well, made it up. And some stuff was changed so it's OK to say it's "based off of", but, really, you need to credit them.
Thanks.
-Mytilene
Thanks.
-Mytilene
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November 18, 2008 at 12:00 AM
What?? No sex scene? Especially after that hot dream scene? Ok I do understand you're not best on writing sex scene but PLEASE, this is ADULTfanfiction.net. At least you could edit this chapter later, right?? Pretty please??
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September 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update!^-^ I absolutly love this story! ahhh I love how Light's getting more bold, and more schememish, he's just more cool this way then nice-Light, also he's sooo...touchy-feely, its hot!^_^. heheh I wonder what L's going to to about it? >-< I'm really looking forward to the next update. can't wait! XP *sitting on edge of chair in suspense*
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September 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This story has so much potential. The idea is an exciting one, and original. However, your writing seems a little rushed, and perhaps could use a little developing, both in vocabulary as well as dialogue.
It isn't bad - quite the contrary - but it's obvious you've been so desperate to throw it all down and finally settle that little plot bunny to rest that you've overlooked some of the things that can make this an excellent fiction.
It isn't bad - quite the contrary - but it's obvious you've been so desperate to throw it all down and finally settle that little plot bunny to rest that you've overlooked some of the things that can make this an excellent fiction.
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July 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome chapters. I keep forgetting where to find this store. Hopefully I'll remember this time. I like the battle between the twins. Uh oh! Kira and Teru know Light's name and face. I hope this isn't a death fic. I don't want to see L or Light die. Anyway, love your story. Can't wait to read more.
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July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really good. cant wait for the next chapter (^___^)
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June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Ha ha! I found this story again. It got moved that's way I couldn't find it, but now that I've found it I will be looking for the updates. Awesome chapters by the way. Loved the brief history between L and Watrai (sp?). I can't wait to read more.
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