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by inuyoukai8

person Khalindora
schedule March 19, 2013 at 12:00 AM
As some other reviewers already pointed out...
Best Saiunkoku Monogatari smut story that I've written.
All characters feel just like they should, the way you wrote it made it absolutely believable.
And it's so rare to see an author write out all the couples... or well, nearly all of the ones that would be believable.
Love it! It's been what nearly 5 years since you wrote it. I'm sure the fandom you are currently in is also in awe of your writing style.
You really made my day with this... so I say thank you... of the bottom of my heart. *bows*
person Hillary
schedule December 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Fantastic lemons! I love the threesome best though. The whole time I watched the anime I thought about how it could all be solved with a little menage-a-trois. =)
person moor
schedule May 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
(Just read the Seiran x Shuurei one-shot you started this collection off with)

Wow. Just... wow. I love how your portrayed Seiran and how gradually you conveyed the shift in their relationship from friendship to more. I like that you had them in-character, the style you wrote in, and how 'considerate' you made them.

Also, Ensei at the end had me laughing. XD

Thank you for sharing!
person Nikolita
schedule February 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hehe, very good stories. In part 1 with Seiran, and he makes her scream... lol I wonder if Shouka hears eh, not just Ensei? LOL that would be an awkward morning after. XD

Would love to read more from you!
person Annalisemarie99
schedule January 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Incredible. To describe lovemaking as one worshiping his God, this is beyond words. I have loved every inch of your stories. I run out of words to describe this.

Have you tried posting this on fanfiction.net? You should. Your writing deserves to be read and appreciated.

Of the collection, since I am huge Seiran-Shuurei, Ryuuki-Shuurei and Ryuuren-Shuurei fan, I loved the shots on them most. :D

Kudos, for such beautiful work, and for making this collection my favourite of all times. :)
person Driorianos
schedule October 7, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Oh, you have to do another. Have to, have to! I really like Ryuuren's, and Seiran's... I was thinking, you haven't done Kouyuu, do you not like him? And then I thought, someone rare... you should do Kou Kijin. Like, the one point where they just show the two together, when she's thinking about how she got the merchant pass? Or if you base these on the manga at all, wehn they bandits are being taken care of, Kijin shows his face to her.
person Ghost Stories
schedule September 25, 2009 at 12:00 AM
So there I was, reading "Here Comes the Rain Again" for the bazillionth time when it occurs to me: "I wonder if she's written stories for any other fandoms IIIIOOOOH MY GOD SAIUNKOKU FIC." CLICKYES. you are now officially my FAVORITE author. You write the steamiest love scenes and all my favorite pairings, and somehow manage to keep even RYUUREN totally in-character! (who'd have thought?) Thank you for sharing your wonderful and VERY sexy stories! (And if its not too much trouble, can Koyu be next? I sincerely love him!)
person Aidreal
schedule October 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
these stories are amazing! They're all very well written, the most notable part being how in-character you manage to keep everyone. You wouldn't be willing to do one with Ensei would you? I've looked everywhere and have yet to find a Ensei/Shuurie pairing and I know if you write it Ensei won't turn into some ridiculously refined or pushovery character >_<. Will definitely be keeping an eye on this story. keep up the good work!
schedule July 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
OOoooo threesome porn, I think you just leveled up. I wonder what pairings next?
schedule June 24, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome, you wrote my request! It's surprisingly serious and doesn't involve radishes in anyway. I like it, its different than what I expected but good. I'm really glad the bottle was birth control and not well... some kind of aphrodiasiac or something. I'm sorry for doubting you. lol

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