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October 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE! Please more of Seiran and Shuurei!!! That's my favorite couple! Very well written...
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September 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice job. Believable and enjoyable. You did a good job, particularly given that I really don't think Shuurei would ever allow anything to happen until she's married. I look forward to future one-shots. Am I to understand that you're going to do the other characters? Personally I prefer Ryuuki, but it would be interesting to see a story that made Koyuu, or Ensei work.
One comment on the structure, but generally in any dialog you put each person's words into a seperate paragraph. Even if one line is a response to the other, the paragraph break makes it easier to tell when the speaker has changed. Keep up the good work!
One comment on the structure, but generally in any dialog you put each person's words into a seperate paragraph. Even if one line is a response to the other, the paragraph break makes it easier to tell when the speaker has changed. Keep up the good work!
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September 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is wonderfull and perfectly written. ^^ I'm glad that aff.net has a Saiunkoku section at least.
I hope to read more from you. ^^ Your writing style is very good and your characters are very well described and in character.
I hope to read more from you. ^^ Your writing style is very good and your characters are very well described and in character.