rate_review Reviews

wow all i have to say is wow and cant wait to read more..and thanks this is giving me ideas

NOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
A cliffhanger!!!
actually, I enjoyed this story...
Feet can be so... sensual

your 1 of my favorite authors, hey i just saw a sexy position i know you'll like, i think you should use it in this story, its here http://www.hentai-foundry.com/pic-26449.html

that was great! um kasumi's not gonna um watch that she?

Oh yay, you're back to updating this! I like it a lot.

I liked it a lot. There's a general lack of Ranma yuri lemons. Glad to see someone write some. Hope you'll update soon.

Interesting, I'll give it that, and it does have some potential. Although, I seriously doubt that Ranma would enter the girl's restroom male and then walk out male, being female only while actually inside, FAR too hazardous for his health if he's seen. Nabiki lying in wait with a video camera? Exceeds believability, unless Ranma-chan's frigging herself on some sort of schedule with a set location. Then you've implied that Nabiki didn't uphold her verbal contract with Ranma and retained at least one copy of the video, which Kasumi seems to have found (which also implies that Nabiki is sloppy with her blackmail material...OOC). Still, as stated, it has potential...provided it doesn't just turn into a S&M fic, wherein everyone in Nerima are sadists and Ranma's a masochist. I think it'd be more interesting to see this go from a near rape of Ranma-chan to an unintended and 'mutually' beneficial relationship between the two. Meaning, later encounters are more consensual and less coerced, and that Nabiki isn't once again portrayed as caring for no one other than herself (if she can all but destroy Ranma, after everything he's done for her family, then any attempt to portray her as caring for her family is a blatant contradiction of behavior).

HEY um...are you dead?

More!

A good (though short, as you mention) start. Looking forward to the next chapter...