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I loved it! This has got to be one of my favourite Death Note fanfictions I have ever read.

You did well in making it seem both in-character and realistic, even the ending seemed plausible (if a little depressing).

Thanks for writing/posting this story for our enjoyment.

this was awesome ^^ I so adore that Raito didn't just accept L's love but made him fight for it :D

Great story. I really liked the way you portrayed L and Light. Even though I am not much into sexually dominating L to be honest.
Anyways you asked an interesting question. And while I guess I am late in answering it I would still try. Being a "pro-Kira" according to your classification (because I am not righteous enough to presume that I would not use a "death note" if I happened to get my hands on it) I guess I could care less who was it that had Kira powers as long as they were not used for personal gain. I would not consider Kira a God or worship him certainly, but I would not be against his actions. Cause with law systems as they are now criminals go free far too often and are not punished for thier crimes enough. In the eyes of a grieving family of a murder victim imprisonment of a murderer is not enough punishment. I am not even talking about rapists. So to find out that a person who have finally dealt some justice to those who deserved it is a college student would not particularly alarm me. I don't believe in a perfect world. No Kira can achieve it. But an improved world? I am all for it! Go, college students!

Chapter 9

You read my fic, too. ♥ ♥ I'm glad you finished this (you did, didn't you?) I fell out of Death note for a while, and just came back to it the other day and have been reading wildly. I was like, "I've already read this one, but I'll reread it cause it was good," then I realized that at some point during my away-from-DN-ness, you'd finished it, and was like, "SQUEE!" So, Ryuuzaki writing his own name in the death note and negating a note-death was a shocking twist, and one that made me giggle at the same time. I have to say that my favourite line was, "I'll give you three days head start on Near and Mello.." cause I love those two (three with Matt) and was excited to see them mentioned.

I have to go finish reading now, cause I have to know what happens next. Thank you for taking the time to reply to my reviews!! It means a lot to me to see my name in the fic. ♥

Chapter 10

Ooooooh. I'm a huge Kira supporter. If there were a real Kira, I'd totally act as a non-stupid Misa to him. Indeed, if it became possible for me to become Kira myself, I'd jump at the chance. I'm going to stalk you over to your other fanfics now, just as a warning.

I'm... an emotion-based person. Meaning, I have a tendency to base decisions and choices more on emotions then on fact or rational thought. Still, I would never support Kira, because no matter how you dice it, killing is wrong; unforgivable. I could forgive other things; but not that. But yet... I also believe that everyone deserves happiness, even if that might be with someone who could be completely wrong or corrupt, so... really I can't condemn L's actions; nor can I agree with Kira's choice. Most people regard me as being very empathetic and can identify with people's emotions and feelings; and to a degree, their thoughts. What Kira wants is an unattainable ideal. He's the most dangerous type of idealist out there; as my Social teacher put it he's "an idealist without a yardstick"; the yardstick is for measuring between the ideal and the reality. Kira is, in a way like Stalin and Hitler; people he probably regards as criminals.

I'll stop my rant now. Anyways, I was just wondering, will Light make his appearance again? I have this theory about him having a form of multiple-personality disorder. There being one called 'Kira' and one called 'Light', I'd find watching them fight for control in the end entertaining.

Liked the story.

Kat.

Dear Duomi-san,

I am at utmost shock that I have yet to have reviewed this excellent story! I've been reading Goodnight Moon for a while, and then I got my internet connection cut off. When I finally had the ability to get on aff, the story was finished, and I had not reviewed it yet TT.TT So...here goes!

Right, so this is probabley the best story that I have ever read...and I mean EVER. I was so addicted to it, that I got depressed at the loss of my precious internet connection for I could no longer read it, lol. You have Light/Kira and L's personalities just right, and every plot twist was perfect. I was constintly wondering what would happen next, which is rare, because I happen to have quite the intuition when it comes to guessing the whole plot of a story before I've finished the second chapter. This was different, though. Pleasantly so, in fact.

Opened endings are, indeed, evil and entertaining all at once, by the way. So now, I'm going to go ahead and get on to reading the sequel, becuase I'm excited to see how you'll petray Near and Mello.

Going world wide would be exciting, wouldn't it? So good luck f you're willing!

Plenty of support from this end,
Kiyoshi Tamakashi (AKA:Kiyo-chan)

haven't read this story in ages!

I love how you portray L in this; the beginnings of the manga anaylist is something I haven't considered...now I need to read the manga again!

I love the tension and I am trying to read this stuff before work and all

keep up the good work! I want to read the sequel too

I just read the whole thing. I loved it. Now I'm going to read the second part of this story.

More L/Light fictions.

'ello girl,

I'm really very much in love with your story.
I think you've managed to capture the essence of the characters extremely well and that makes your story much more satisfying to read.
I would leave a comment for every chapter of your story (but I'm lazy) LOOL. Please forgive me. XD

But goodness, I must say, I can't wait to read more of this alternate ending that you've come up with. I'm very very impressed by the amount of effort that's gone into this fic. :3

Well, I'll see you over at your new fic! XD