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Chapter 7

I have no idea what I said to warrant that kind of a response from you, but thank you so much for writing back! I love getting little shout-outs in stories I've reviewed. ^___^

Hmm... About this chapter. Well, to put it shortly, it was wonderful. I loved it from start to finish. In particular, I love Light. Seriously, "Don't do that when I'm trying to argue with you" was fantastic.

Also, this this the single best line in Fanfiction EVAR: "Light-kun... You won't win. I have... a secret weapon..." *squees and giggles with fangirlish glee* I can't wait for the next chapter!!

Well, most definitely a thumbs up to your latest chapter there. I think the make out, argue, make out, argue, sex equation worked out very well! You've done well to build up the angst to that moment from the previous chapters. I can't wait to read more!

I assure you, your concerns were entirely unfounded.
That was pretty hot, I must admit.
I am off to have a cold shower, and I hope that by the time I get back you have updated already. Lol.

the fic is brilliant and not to mention hot. update soon ! ^-^ (btw, i luv the invisible games scene - suits them really)

I really enjoy the latest chapter. T_T
It made me all emotional. Lol. I got all "Why can't they just be happy together!?" XD. [I never think that, Lol. I'm a huge Kira supporter. :heart:]

This chapter was highly enjoyable, and my favorite so far. ::waits for more.::

Sweet mother of god, this is good! I anxiously await any and all future updates.

I greatly enjoy this story, and hope you keep writing it. It really is becoming a beautiful piece.

This is such a great fic! I love the interaction between Light and L, and the conversations they have. I think you do an excellent job at keeping them in character while creating an intimate relationship between them. I so can't wait for the next chapter I am seriously hooked. Thanks for writing this!

Woo! I am happy we got to see a bit more of the old L. I still like that characterization of him a lot. Also I liked Light's analyses of himself as Kira. I've always thought he really should logically be able to come to the same conclusions that L did about him being Kira, even without his memories, because it just makes so much sense. I am curious to see where things will go from here, and I don't know where you are planning to end it but I do kind of hope we get to see how Light reacts if he gets his memories back. He's obviously attracted to L now, so that would be interesting, and I wonder if L would still be able to apprehend him. Either way my money is on a happy ending!

Chapter six

About how long does it usually take for you to get chapters out? Because I am THOROUGLY addicted to this, and I really want more. Update it soon?