rate_review Reviews

That was very depressing and dark, and well-written. You captured the essence of self-loathing there, I think, in his words, saving you from having to dwell on his actions. You mention them, so as not to gloss over them, but there's such a depth to his monologue that the intent is well-conveyed without having to be belabored. I especially liked the way you conveyed the affair. I also like the way you detailed his remorse.

I suppose what I liked best about it, though, was the way you set it up. You introduced it in such a way that it could easily be a slash or threesome situation; and in a way, it had to be, for Lloyd to accept Sven's daughter so easily. For it to be such an involved triangle, the way you tell it... suffice to say, I enjoyed the read. Thank you for sharing.