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by moontatoo

schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
it was good to see Ryo doing the work now ^.~
person nebulia
schedule March 12, 2008 at 12:00 AM
"Dee chuckles shakily. “Oh, man; I can’t be that good! “He gazes at Ryo, limp and boneless.”I’d have killed you by now!” He shakes he head weakly, still laughing a bit.”But hell; what a way to go!”"

I dunno, but every time I read this wonderful, wonderful fic, this line just cracks me up. XD
schedule March 5, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Delicious! I love first time stories. The change of verb tense works so well. And many just damn fine sentences and expressions. I love "playground of willing male flesh" especially... Yummy. Thank you for this!
person Iarejedi
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, that was freaking hot. Holy mess. My eyes are like this O.O That was an awesome ficlet. Coodos to you on this one. :D
person Kuromei
schedule October 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
*fans herself* Oh, my... I love it when Ryo's so...seme. X3 *blushes before the nosebleed* *passes out from bloodloss*
person Ladymynx
schedule October 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whoa -- another good one. I especially enjoy stories where Ryo is the seme. We've seen in the manga what a bad-ass he can be despite his looks. It was fantastic to see that come out in your work and having Ryo bringing Dee to his kness -- for want of a better term. Keep up the good work!
person Daxemon
schedule September 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, now this story was so hot I think my hair started to smoke. Moontatto I've became a fan of yours soon
after I discovered Kita and Subu's fanfic Misery. They got me into the Drake/JJ fangirl mindset, but then I got sucked further in with your fanfic KISS and we were off and running and now I am completely and utterly obsessed with Kita and Subu and anything Drake/JJ. This review is kinda like catch up. You are the only fanfic author where I can say I've read everthing in your library and have loved it from beginning to end even the parts that made me cringe. "Passing Time" is one of my obssesions. I did leave a review back when, but it was really lame, I was new.....very new. I am still a hardcore Dee/Ryo fan, but now my mind is open to other pairings {Drake/JJ, Dee/Berkley.....etc.} You are an exceptional writer and since I haven't let you know, I apologize now, I am a devoted fan and I always get a thrill whenever I've seen that you have added something new to this wonderful array of fanfics and I have more to pick and choose from. It seems that we Drake/JJ fans are in a small world. I was reading some of the reviews that you recieved and noticed that some of the other authors that I frequently read also find your work to be very good. Kita and Subu especially, Kita is crazy if you haven't noticed.....I like her, she's nuts, but has great taste in fics, so does Subu. Well I better wrap this up. I will be keeping an eye out for any updates. Oh yeah just to let you know...if you haven't notice *ego balloons up* I'm Garita's "Muse" for DEE her fanfic. I was so glad to see that you had reviewed she's very good, don't you think.

Later.
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Chapter two?? Where is it? I need it NOW!!!
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn, That was Hot!!!! I love an aggressive RYO. Cool fic. Thanks.
schedule September 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Oh,wow... that was hot!!!

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