schedule
November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It's alright so far, better than your other one, which seems to fuck up the characters ages. I'd like to see some more misty masturbating to the thought of ash.
schedule
November 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Earthix- it does? Oops, I guess I forgot to say how old everyone was in the other fic. I'll get that patched up in the next chapter. As far as masturbation...no further comment. I don't wanna spoil anything for you guys, do I? No. :P Hopefully I'll have the next chapters out before too long...
KABOOM!
KABOOM!
schedule
November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Narukyuforeva- Well, if you really want to find out, then I better post the next chapter, huh?
Sad thing is, I've been too hyper from my sugar high to concentrate...>_<
Another thing....shit, I can't think of another excuse to save my ass. :P Seriously tho, I'll work on the story ASAP, I promise.
KABOOM!
Sad thing is, I've been too hyper from my sugar high to concentrate...>_<
Another thing....shit, I can't think of another excuse to save my ass. :P Seriously tho, I'll work on the story ASAP, I promise.
KABOOM!
schedule
October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I love how Ash's mom has no problem seeing her son in bed, naked, taking a sex nap with some chick he just boned, the sheets probably soaked with fluids.
schedule
October 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ryuukohaden- Well, if only it were that simple. Yes, they are as naked as the day they were born, but not completly exposed to anyone who happens to peek in the door. Aw shit, I wanna say more, but I can't! Damn it damn it damn it! Ah well, when I get the next chapter out, everyone will know why...
KABOOM!
KABOOM!
schedule
October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Darkened.Naruto- Pfft, the hell if I know how old they are! lol I haven't seen the anime in so long, it's rather sad. HOWEVER, I did catch the episode where Ash and co. were returning to Kanto. Though I am unsure how old they were at the time, your suggestions seem pretty accurate...
Conan- I take that all words being capitalized is a good thing?? eh, doesn't bother me. And yes, this story will definitely continue, as Chapter 3 is STILL in the works...but I will finish it soon...hopefully. =D
Well, now that that's over with...
KABOOM!
Conan- I take that all words being capitalized is a good thing?? eh, doesn't bother me. And yes, this story will definitely continue, as Chapter 3 is STILL in the works...but I will finish it soon...hopefully. =D
Well, now that that's over with...
KABOOM!
schedule
October 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Nice story. Good start. How old is everyone in your fic. I know Ash is about 17-19 or so right. May should be about 15-16 then. Hope you update soon I like the story so far keep up the good work...
schedule
October 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the review. It's nice seeing that people like my story so far. Chapter 3 is being worked on right now, by the way. Should be up...eventually. :)
KABOOM!
KABOOM!
schedule
October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Pretty Hot story. This is actually one of the best ones I've read. I'll be looking forward to the next chapter.
schedule
September 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
While I'm not a huge fan of the Ash/May pairing, I will say that I love how well-written this story is. The action between them is good, and I can't wait to see how much it'll heat up in later chapters. Keep up the good work with this.