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November 28, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Wait, was that the end?
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July 19, 2009 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE SOON
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March 30, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Amen to that Magi^. I agree, the grammar and tense don't have to be perfect and your sex scenes are awesome (Kristina/Arcanine one of the hottest scenes EVER).
Which reminds me, are you killing of Kristina, I hope not.
Please update soon, I'm getting withdrawl. Your fan, dave.
Which reminds me, are you killing of Kristina, I hope not.
Please update soon, I'm getting withdrawl. Your fan, dave.
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February 18, 2009 at 12:00 AM
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Present_tense
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Past_tense
Pick one, please. And get a spellchecker. If you're going to write a story in the present tense in the beginning, stick with it throughout. But why, really? To be unique? It just reads strangely. And if you can't work a sex scene into a particular chapter, it probably doesn't belong there.
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Past_tense
Pick one, please. And get a spellchecker. If you're going to write a story in the present tense in the beginning, stick with it throughout. But why, really? To be unique? It just reads strangely. And if you can't work a sex scene into a particular chapter, it probably doesn't belong there.
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February 3, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I know i've read this story before, but i may not have reviewed it until now. This is quite an excellent fic and it grabbed and held my attention from the first chapter. Sex is great, but i like the one's with a story. (Rush Hour 3 quote) This story has a bit of everything and that's how all serious fics should be. You're a great author and i look forward to future updates from you.
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February 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I'm so glad youre back. Just one question though, is this the end of the story?
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November 29, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
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November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I hope so. It says a lot about this story that after a year, I'm still thinking about it. Usually I can forget things overnight. You, my friend, have some of the best ideas and grammatical skills I've yet found on this site. It would be a shame to lose them.
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November 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM