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November 16, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Dude. Update. SOON. It's been over a year. I NEED MOAR!
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April 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story, love it. But please, PLEASE!!! For the love of all that is holy (or unholy, which might be more appropriate), finish it!!! Please?! Or at least do another chapter. You stopped at the worst spot imaginable and I'm dying to know who the other Chosen One is! So please, consider continuing this story?
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March 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
XD awesome work... Now, FINISH THE DAMNED STORY. What happens next?
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January 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I've been wondering will he get the pokemon pregnant because that would be cool?
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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey CrazyIvan if your reading this, leave a review on my story of what "semper fei" means please.
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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Flannery's Surprise - mxgross story stolen and copied from the person below
Overheated - Crazyivan this is the original story and i've already sent 30 e-mails to the admins yet they STILL do nothing. >_>
Overheated - Crazyivan this is the original story and i've already sent 30 e-mails to the admins yet they STILL do nothing. >_>
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
It was a good first chapter, no spelling errors, no gramatical errors, good format.
Nice details, great effort.
You get an 8 out of 10. It's not a 9 out of 10 because I am currently mad at Nato, meaning all western things, (Besides Mountain Dew), currently get one less point in ranking.
Semper phi, carry on.
Nice details, great effort.
You get an 8 out of 10. It's not a 9 out of 10 because I am currently mad at Nato, meaning all western things, (Besides Mountain Dew), currently get one less point in ranking.
Semper phi, carry on.
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Probably should have told you this in my last review, but I'm not going to review the rest of the chapters untill I'm in a better mood, from what I hear, it is a damn good story, no reason to let a bad mood spoil my enjoyment.
Also, be on the look out, there is apparently plagerists abound. One of my stories, Overheated, has practicaly been copied, renamed, and reposted. I will get to the bottom of this, let's hope it doesn't come down to an argument with a 7.62
Untill a better mood, semper phi, carry on.
Also, be on the look out, there is apparently plagerists abound. One of my stories, Overheated, has practicaly been copied, renamed, and reposted. I will get to the bottom of this, let's hope it doesn't come down to an argument with a 7.62
Untill a better mood, semper phi, carry on.
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November 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, very nice, I think. Although there were a few spots that were difficult to understand, the story flows and I am enjoying it greatly. I can't wait for the next chapter ^^
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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I never really reviewed any stories, (in fact this is my first review) but I really like your story, can't wait for your next chapter!