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hmmmm there are no limitations in your story....that is good i like that in a fic there are no boundaries in your writing

This is the Random Reviewer, now reviewing "Varying Circumstances".

Well, it seems that there has been quite a bit of plot development. Nicholas catches a very rare pokemon, and gets confronted by several others, with the mention of even more. Now, I would say which, but I know there's people out there who read the reviews, then the story. So if they want to find out, then they'll have to read first.

Also, quite a nice ending. I wonder where this story's heading...I'll just have to wait for the next chapter.

~Random Reviewer~

dont worry magikavin i do have to ask questions to find asnwers right...i now know you dont like those two animes ok its done with continue with your work and dont underestimate yourself i was merely expressing my opinion which i now see some are starting to question right in their own reviews your story is definetly in the same league of sinners at least and thank you for chapt 10 that was quick...

congratulations another satisfied customer.



-i know this is off subject but MagiKavin have you ever considered doing an evangelion or rurouni kenshin fanfic i know your already busy with life and this epic probably equal or better than Sinners by Slashfirestorm must take time but i have a challenge in both the EVA and RK sections dealing with a particularly neglected pairing... would it be possible for you in the future to take a look at them i have plot suggestions and i appreciate any attempt at a response to either of them..... one from you would guarantee a great fic and since you arent afraid to do crazy pairings(no disrespect crazy pairings are what we need around here) you would find my challenges.....interesting(nothing too crazy just rare but much needed pairings)- both challenges are on the first page of each section and look for my name shinobusensui as the author


THANK YOU for chap 9 and for your time

Yet another great addition to the story. More plot, and better yet, MORE SEX! lol but still, the mix of important plot advances and lots of sex is cool. You don't see that a lot anymore. I can only wonder when Chapter 10 will be out...HURRY UP, DAMN YOU! just kidding. Take your time...just make sure its good. ;)

In response to shinobu sensui- :-O w-w-what??? Yes, I agree that this story is good, and definately comprable with Slash Firestorm's fic, Sinners...but better? Hmm...I suppose that's purely a matter of choice there. Actually, now that I think about it...I don't know which I like better myself. o_o. Well, before I make a fool of myself....I'm gonna go ahead and stop here...>_>

ive already run out of comliments i dont know what to say anymore hope you dont take it the wrong way although i each chapter gets harder and harder to wait for

This review. When I had first seen this story, I thought it would be nothing more than one of the several other, poorly written stories that cover this site. Based on the fact that this story has accumulated so many reviews in such a short amount of time, I decided to give the story a chance. This story is one of the most well written I have seen, and I've had my fair share of fanfiction. Grammatical errors were limited, which is always a good thing.

Most importantly, though, is the plot development. The relationship between the Absol and her trainer may be based off of nothing more than instinctive lust, but the amount of trust between them is already off the charts. A 5-star rating, to say the least. I do believe that future additions to this series will be of equal or greater quality. Farewell, and best of luck for upcoming installments.

i got 8 days left of free time(days im takin off) so im probably the 1st person to review ur work every time all im doin now is playin PS3 and goin on the computer i would go out and stuff but my poor PS3 has been collectin dust i fell bad for it dont have time to play games any more anyway,about the story as i said before im very impressed with this and these facts----that u took the pikachu idea into consideration, will have the characters travel through all parts of the region, and have been posting up chapters this fast, a mistake many great stories have around here is that they have chapters posted up every 2-4 weeks something youre's is unique for not doing but its alright if u take a breather once in a while since youve gotten impecable timing with 5 chapters already

to not post up at least 3 more chapters would be a federal crime... keep it up... so far your only getting better and better with ur chapters

keep it comin story's very smart..looks like u know what your doin and doin it fast (not to force you in any

direction but that

girl with the red hair does have a pikachu ....right... ;) -just a memo nothing more u do what u want to do