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Amazing, that's the only word to come to mind. Just hope this fic has not been abandon. If not, try & keep us posted?

Pure, twisted genius.

The use of a rarely summoned sex goddess, (aka Maya,) the twisted outlook on her sexuality and her state of mind, and most of all, the combination of lust, disgust, humiliation and satisfaction that this whirlwind of a technician is packing, and the realistic end to their... scene... was perfect.

I yearn for the next chapter. Please, do not let us down.

This is great, update as soon as you can. I'm really into this and interested to know how this'll all turn out. Btw nice job on the pairing, a rare one at that.

Ye gods! Why do I have a feeling that this'll go all dark?

Either way, good for you to be back. Haven't read your stories for a while. If I may punt in an idea, how about a Shinji/Yui story? (Some of you may find me to be revolting/disgusting, but I know I have my reasons why I want to pass this idea...)

If you weren't planning to continue this with at least another chapter I'd say it'd fit right in with the rest of Nightshift. Noticed a few errors, but nothing really major. Unstable!Maya is.. entertaining, is not quite the word I'm looking for, but it works. I liked this one better than the last chapter of Nightshift, also more than Lavish (which I didn't get more than halfway through before quitting it for this). Updates are always good, but I realise that most people don't have lots of free time to devote to writing and those that do wind up putting it off to read other stuff--which is my current excuse. So, take your time updating if you need to.

Wow. That was great. Though I have to feel for poor Maya...fics tend to feature her snapping more often then other characters, for some reason. You really sold me on the "it feels good in the NOW, so do it" vs. Maya's intense regret shortly afterward.

Good Stuff, do update! ^.^