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October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very well written. I hate sad endings, but I gotta tell ya, this had a beautiful sadness to it. Poor Shu...and Eiri WAAAAAAHHHHH T-T
schedule
October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was beautifully written, and I can't imagine it as more than a one-shot. Thanks for it!
schedule
October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ergh! So good!
You made me cry!!!!!
You made me cry!!!!!
schedule
October 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I can't stop crying. Poor shuichi. O god.....poor shuichi. (Still crying)
Why did you kill him? Not shuichi.....Please......(can't control her tears)
O god, he was calling for him all night,...(Hiccup) & he never came. (Trying to wipe away her tears)
My poor shuichi. (Hiccup,...Hiccup)...(Covering her face with hands)...SHUICHI!!!
They never got to say goodbye, or that he loved him. (tears falling down her hands from her tears stricken face)……(Hiccup, hiccup,...hiccup)
Poor shu. Sigh. (wipes tears stricken face). Thank you for the beautiful story. (Hiccup). Sigh. It was so sad. & it hurt so much. Yet it was one of the most beautiful/painful stories I've ever read. Thank you for writing it.
Why did you kill him? Not shuichi.....Please......(can't control her tears)
O god, he was calling for him all night,...(Hiccup) & he never came. (Trying to wipe away her tears)
My poor shuichi. (Hiccup,...Hiccup)...(Covering her face with hands)...SHUICHI!!!
They never got to say goodbye, or that he loved him. (tears falling down her hands from her tears stricken face)……(Hiccup, hiccup,...hiccup)
Poor shu. Sigh. (wipes tears stricken face). Thank you for the beautiful story. (Hiccup). Sigh. It was so sad. & it hurt so much. Yet it was one of the most beautiful/painful stories I've ever read. Thank you for writing it.