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update plz

"She hissed through clenched teeth, emerald eyes aflame" very nice. Angie I must say this is extremely well written and has tremendous detail. I think this part has much more attention grabbing substance than the last one I read. It definitely left me wanting to read more. Keep up the great work. Again... if you can grab them from the beginning they will read through everything. If you don't it's on to the next story.

Hey that's not fair 2 stop the story right there the way u did oh boy u hurt my feelings

this is... interesting. Not in a bad sense at all actually, i'm just not quite sure what to make of it. megumi saitou certainly is an AU pairing, so I really am quite curious to see what's going to happen. So far I like the way you've characterised them: aitou the same cynical bastard as ever, megumii pretending not to be affected by anything. Keep it up I'm keeping an eye open for this one!

Curiously interesting, and as the first reviewer said, you capture the characters well. I'd love to see how it goes.

Suggestion: Split the paragraphs some more?