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for Sweet Captive

by Jollyolly

schedule January 20, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I loved this story! And I so wasn't expecting that ending. XD It was a nice twist. Great job! ^o^
person Mikkigg
schedule November 16, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Perfect...that is all I can say. The ending was awesome...very unexpected...please write more. They are one of my favorite pairings. Now I can go to sleep with wonderful dreams, Thank you!
schedule October 19, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well Done!!! I'm glad that you're so detailed in this story. You also did a good job keeping the characters "in character" so to speak. All in, xcellent job! Looking 4ward to more great stories such as this one :)
schedule October 15, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hey!! Great writing. I really didn't see that coming at all. For them to be role-playing?! Awesome!! Haha. Please continue more writing and i'm glad someone is increasing the Muraki/Tsuzuki fics. They're after all, a lovely couple. =D
person mamarita
schedule October 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was wonderful- please make it a one-shot- don't ruin it by adding to it!!!

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