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Stunningly Beautiful. Just wonderful.

Wow!! Oh my god this was soo hot! and still so sweet! Are you going to continue or is it a oneshot?

Very nicely written and good attention to characterization. I like the inclusion of Shichiroji and the alternating perspective.
Very hot.

Wow...the last line...Man. That hit me hard, and I loved the poignant use of names and distance. Wonderful. I love how their love making was so unexpected.

wow, nice story. very good visualization.

looooooved it lol that was great now when i watch the anime i always always ALWAYS think back to this story lol good job :)

I loved this story. We need more "Samurai 7" fics from you. Thanks for sharing!

wow, very nice. rarely i come across an author so talented that i want to write a review. :) you are amazing, period. they were in character the whole time, it was so believable!

Wow...I'm speechless. Why hasn't anyone reviewed this? I was expecting to read a pwp or lemon, but the breath and depth of detail you went into, describing the actions of the characters, their feelings, really blew me away. You really nailed down their personalities, perfectly, especially Kyuuzo. He is so quiet and mysterious, never says much, but you really brough him out with that internal monologue, alternating with 3rd person narration. It was really great how you combined the two, they blended perfectly. I also love the depth of emotion you put into their sexual counter, making it life like as sex is an emotional as well as physical experience. Too often in fanfiction I see the emotional aspect neglected or a usual "I love you" is said before the lemon happens. It's great Kyuuzo stayed gentle, showing his tender inner self through action. He definately seems to be the type that speaks through action. It was nice that you included nature like the fireflies, cicadas and stars in the story too. I see in fanfiction too the surroundings of the characters can get neglected at times. Have you read the Tale of Genji? It's a famous Japanese novel written by a Heian aristocrat in the 11th century, one of the world's first novels. Your style reminds me of that with the nature, and emphasis on emotions. I wanted to write a Kyuuzo x Katsushiro fic, but yours is lovely^_^ You've inspired me to work on and put more depth into my own fanfiction. Thank you for writing this. I Hope you don't mind the long review. This is a gem:)