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January 3, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait for the Tentacool and Tentacruel parts
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November 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That's all?
WAAAH!
I think it's an awesome idea, so hurry up and write more! Got it?!
WAAAH!
I think it's an awesome idea, so hurry up and write more! Got it?!
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November 18, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very weird... um... women don't orgasm that often, you know? Can't you try to make at least THAT bit realistic...?
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October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay, I admit it, I'm curious to see how you're gonna manage Onyx...
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October 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o.o
that was one of the craziets things ive ever read....
XD
keep it coming.lol. Cant stop laughing. ^^ hope to see more soon.
that was one of the craziets things ive ever read....
XD
keep it coming.lol. Cant stop laughing. ^^ hope to see more soon.
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October 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Um..okay kinda messed up and if you plan to do them all it's going tobe too long a story, and also Mantyke is a gen 4 pokemon, not even close to the original 150.
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October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I want to like this fiction. I really, really do. However, the spelling errors, the lack of description in the sex scenes, the short length of the fiction itself, and some of the stuff in the actual sex being cringe-worthy, makes me look down on this fiction. PLEASE work on fixing these things to make your fiction better.
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October 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
not bad! kep going! XDjejeje!!!
see you
see you
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October 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Well you've got an interesting idea here but you need to work on detail and spelling just a bit have a bit more description of the sex scenes and this could be good
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae