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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, so I've read it and enjoyed it nicely. You set up your episodes well, its almost in the page turner fashion. The sex scene was nice but for some, it may come off either too strong or too soft or too wordy. Keep it up, and hopefully some people will give you advice. Oh yeah, is Spike coming back? Anyway, I'll see you later today...keep it up.
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October 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Awesome...loved it...
whoever said that you chapter 2 was too wordy
they must have not have read enough fanfics (i've seen worst [i meant in a wordy/ too detailed kind of way])
but yeah....AWESOME!!!! keep up the good work!!!
whoever said that you chapter 2 was too wordy
they must have not have read enough fanfics (i've seen worst [i meant in a wordy/ too detailed kind of way])
but yeah....AWESOME!!!! keep up the good work!!!