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for A Second Bite

by AkitaandSubuchan

schedule January 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You really stopped here. For two years now I have been waiting for you to continue but... you really stopped THERE. That's worse than a cold shower. D8

Anyway - I enjoy your ff[s] greatly. I especially love how your JJ is not a wimp, like in the other ones. Thank you for writing. :3
person Silvain
schedule December 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Gyah, where's the next part?? *grumbles about busy authors leaving their stories mid-sceene before remebering she does that herself a lot*

I love this, I can't wait to read the next part!
person Poshu
schedule November 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
woah..... I just got done with ch. 5..... I feel very aweful that I didn't find this until now....Sorry Kita and Subu.... anyway this is hawt and a little.... raunchy.......but that goes without saying, your work is excellent and I love love love Ted growling and his fear in the third chapter.... and his super sonic hearing! :D
person shadwdryuu
schedule November 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
wah! please tell me that isn't the end! that would be so cool to read about, a relationship between ted, drake and JJ, not to mention, the scene in which you left of was incredibly to hot to stop, please continue it!!
person catti
schedule October 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was sooooooooooo mean...leave us (okay me) totally hanging onto the moment and you have to end it right there!!!..I dont know who to blame Subu-chan or Kita-chan...maybe both...have not been douling out enough chocolate or what?...cries...well you have to update before 11/08 because Im going on vacation for ten days...PLEASE!!!...If you update before then, Ill buy you one of those spinning Mickey Mouse lights...their so pretty when its dark out....Ill even through in Minnie ears for Subu-chan...laughs....catti
person Anon
schedule October 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
where is the next chapter!!!
person kUmAgoRo-BeAm
schedule October 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE update soon, im loving this story heaps!!!!!!!!!!!!!
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
.... *whimper* I wanna read more!!! please update again soon... I'm finding this very entertaining! ^^ i love the way you write this... it's beautifully discriptive and so much fun to read!!! please update soon!!
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Damnit chapter five better be in the works right now because I just can't stand the wait! You must give me something!Even if it's just a bite!
person catti
schedule October 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Feeling better, but wonder where you two have been..*sobs*..no one writes, no one calls...*sobs*..feel so unloved...*ooo, is that a 5lb box of chewy carmels?*...umbfebeteretebb...*swallows*..update soon?..catti

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