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Please continue this - please, please, please! It's effing brilliant! <3

Fun! Fun! Fun! So much potential. You pull us right in from the beginning. I hope you'll continue with this - it's my favourite Saiyuki pairing

Humm...seems very interesting. I would love to see how Senzo reacts when he comes to the realization that Gojyo is the only (and last) man in his life to satisfy his sexual gratifications! Hahaha! Do update soon!

Hello! Wow, good going! Inriguing plot open to speculations...^.- only one small detail was awkward - what happened to Sanzo's injury, did Hakkai heal it or was it just bandaged once arrived to hotel?
I hope there will be a continuation because such a cliffhanger is just a bad tease, you know! Also, i wonder if having sex once is enough to break the effects or if the said sex should be MOST SATISFYING for that. Like if it's non-con (I picture Sanzo snapping at last and forcing poor Gojyo on his knees (Sanzo'll want all the control even while in denial about the whole hard-on thing, I guess) and thorowly hurting 'im in the process; mild guilt issues to follow (sorry, my fantasies get twisted sometimes T_T) and if a blowjob could be sufficient or it should necessarily be the full intercourse? I personnaly liked the part when Sanzo argues with his body the most and the masturbating part is delicious, so I'd like more of such musings, like his "secret" observation of Gojyo and getting angry because he WANTS TO GET SOME and the redhead is such a tease even when he isn't aware. And if I think about it now Gojyo was quite alarmed about the injury so... he may have some feelings for the monk. And .. oh! it just get some ideas in my head about how Sanzo wants just to rid of the poison and Gojyo willingly agrees but is so depressed afterwards because he wanted more. And ... guh! - see, your story just opened the flood. Oh, well, the more reason to cheer you on for the next chapter!

I would LOVE to see you continue this.
It's very good.

Awesome chapter, well written. I love the subtle way you've worked Hakkai's sadistic nature in. I also particularly love the way you've written Sanzo's thoughts while he's trying to deal with his unfamiliar problem.

PS: Signing in this time. Your characterizations and character voices are spot-on. I hope you are going to update. (Wow, that's the first time in a long time that I've said that to ANYONE.)

Really good so far! It's one of those predictable scenarios but you've written it so well that I'm buying it completely. I don't mind some yaoi now and then but I really like your "Sanzo's-not-gay" premise, and you have some nice imagery here and there. I especially like the play-out of the shower scene, and the end (wipe it away like the memories)-- well done!! :)

awesome. hope there will be more to this.

*grins* The thought processes of all the characters, including the original ones, were easy to read and understandable in their nature.

You've got an excellent start here. I hope to see more soon!