rate_review Reviews

Wow just wow I like this fic.

I am glad to see this story reposted. It is a simple but good perspective on a character and relationship with her friends. What it lacks in depth and detail, it makes up for in expression. A quality quick read.

Sorry to get back to you here, but you reviewed one of my stories, and it was a good review so I wanted to reply directly. I understand all your problems with the story, the first two chapters I'd had in mind for a while and the third I only wrote because I was procrastinating. I know having a hymen broken is terrible, but I think in quite a few of the stories I've read people tend to brush over it not wanting the pain to take away from the, I don't know, overall sexiness maybe. I have deleted the third chapter and I'll give it another go when I have some spare time. Thank you very much for you review, it's great to get a helpful one, especially since while you were criticizing (constructively) you were nice about it too, saying you liked the first chapters. If you like it enough, keep checking back and hopefully you'll like the next chapter better :)