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November 2, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hot, enjoyable tale. I would just note that Ayeka should have been a virgin her first time. Also, fisting is hotter then dildos. Hope to see more.
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November 7, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really loved this story!. Ryoko is my favorite in Tenchi and I can't stand Ayeka, I hope Ryoko tortures her more!
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December 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great stuff, there's not nearly enough yuri of this calibre around. Easily one of the best I've read recently, Even more detail on the physical aspect or more developed dialogue would be one of the few things that could improve if you were looking for some constructive critisism, it's still all good regardless.
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November 21, 2007 at 12:00 AM
You should update! A sequal would be great!
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November 13, 2007 at 12:00 AM
you should, you should, btw i think next time i see Ryoko using a whip cause she's into that kind of BDSM too.
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November 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
A really hot fic, liked the title too. Earnestly I hope for a chapter 2, and being the pervert I am may I suggest Ryoko forcing Ayeka to serve herself and Tenchi. Beyond that, I give this a 5/5.
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October 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
That was truly a fun read. Signed a fan of Ryoko.