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Blowpops = Win.

This story = Epic win.

Awesome oneshot this was, it made my night. =D I was suptrised when Slash dipped a blowpop into Psymakio, but I like new ideas. I'm open-minded like that. Makes me wonder what a Christmas special would be like, and I'm pretty sure it'd involve a mistletoe... and maybe a candycane. XD

Eh, I can't really see a Thanksgiving oneshot. My mind doesn't seem configured to project that. :/ Dunno why. Well, I guess that's all I have to type here, for now. So yeah.

DemonicStrife---The Christmas one won't just replace a lollipop with a candycane! That'd be far too easy. I have an idea in mind already, and if it still looks good when I start writing it, I can promise that it'll be very cute, heh.

Like, so cute that I considered using it in the main Sinners...

Now, I need to stop watching Bonanza and Gunsmoke (lol I'm a dork) and get back to chapter 17!

Anonymous---Well, the candy don't gotta be too big...after all, Gardevoir isn't, HEH. And I would have to be a MAJOR prick to have something like...

Epilogue

GARDEVOIR GETS AN INFECTION. SLASH TAKES HER TO A DOCTOR, WHO GETS SUSPICIOUS AND REPORTS SLASH TO THE AUTHORITIES FOR POKEMON ABUSE. HE AND GARDEVOIR ARE SEPARATED FOREVER, AND GIOVANNI AND KIAKO TURN THE WORLD INTO A DARK, BLOOD-DRENCHED NIGHTMARE FOR ALL ETERNITY

...even in a non-canon oneshot. However, I will make a disclaimer that ANYONE ATTEMPTING TO IMITATE THE EVENTS OF THIS STORY CANNOT HOLD ME RESPONSIBLE FOR ANY INJURY THAT RESULTS. ALSO, I RECOMMEND LICKING THE CANDY TO A SMOOTH SURFACE BEFORE ENGAGING IN ANY PLAY. :-O

As for the multiple worlds thing, I think of it in terms of Stephen King's Dark Tower system...many different worlds on different levels of reality. The true incarnations of Slash, Psymakio, and Kiako are in the "world next door", so to speak...and saying anything else about their connections would spoil stuff for Sinners, so I won't, heh.

Pokefurry---Candycane, even without the curvy part, wouldn't really be...satisfactory, I think, lol.

Imasuky Lomae---Yep. "Hey Brock, how's our relationship developed since I first met you?"

"Uh, your voice actor changed, I think. And I got a mom."

THIS IS NOT CHARACTER DEVELOPMENT

Twi---DX?

...are you ready?

Oh, you mean...oh, lol. See, I was making a wrestling pun, and...ah, never mind. Yes, Gardevoir tying up Slash and having her way with him, coming soon to an internets near you.

Although the next story I'm ACTUALLY writing is chapter 17 of Sinners, heh. Then...I dunno, probably 18 and 19 of Sinners, then editing work on the rest of my stuff before oneshot'ing a few things. We'll see.

RoboRed---Don't worry, it ain't going nowhere, heh. Even if AFF were to disappear, I'd still be writing, probably sending it out over e-mail or something.

The lollipop idea did end up being much hotter than I originally expected, kekeke. I need to be even more...creative...for later oneshots...

benn454---The only Thanksgiving pun I could think of is "I'm thankful for that sweet ass", and, uh...not much I can do with that, lol. Although there may be a Gardevoir-meets-the-parents event in Sinners eventually...but that might not exactly end well. :-/

Gardevoir trick-or-treating in a fairy costume? *dies from cuteness overload* And the blow pop was hawt. Great oneshot Slash! :D

I don't know if you could really do a Thanksgiving story. Since that's an US/Canadian holiday, and Hoenn is part of Japan, but hey, that's what artistic license is for! XD

I'll let you get back to writing chapter 17 now. lol

Imasuky Lomae---Like Gardevoir's magic retractable chest...thing. Heh.

DizzyRye---I shall never stop writing. To quote "Throw Momma From The Train", a writer writes---ALWAYS.

The Christmas oneshot will be swell (despite me not liking it myself). Hot chocolate, walks on cold nights, lights and snow and mistletoe and blah blah blah. I'll probably just "suspension-of-disbelief" the whole religion thing, because I'm too lazy to Jirachify it, lol.

Incidentally, I'm saving devil Gardevoir for the bondage oneshot. :-O

This is the sort of thing I would expect from a somewhat-AU non-canon oneshot.

Nice work. My only quibble (and it may just be me) is the use of such a sugary treat for such a purpose (and consciously thinking of that made me think of how large and durable the candy must have been, but that's more believable). I'd be worried about Gardy getting some kind of infection! Of course, that (probably) won't happen (will it? I don't /think/ that's where you were going with it)...

Semi-related side comment: Your comments somewhere (too lazy to find them now, heh) about the "original versions" or however you said it of the three main characters made me imagine some sort of "many worlds" universe where versions of those three are fated to constantly run into/interact with eachother. The first example I can think of (that is coherent, so it rules out any I've come up with) is the Evangelion universe, with its dating sim-ish "Angelic Days" spinoff. Of course, that could just be some sort of mind-melded version of "reality is relative" taken to an extreme as opposed to parallel dimensions or reincarnation.

And THAT made me think of Zelda. *shakes head* I think I'll just stop typing now. My point was either already made or long forgotten.

Take care.

This was great i loved everything about it oh and with that Christmas oneshot a candcane might be fun but now htat i think about it that might hurt a bit

Out of boredom I watched an episode of pokemon and at the end the narrator said they’d never be quite the same and as soon as I heard that I couldn’t help but yell “Yes they will.” I mean it’s just like you say no plot development and plus how come no one ages Ash should be at least twenty something by now

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

p.s the reason i left the review her is sinners review page take to long to load anymore

"One of these days, I'll find the right fetish and you'll be fapping like a fucking meerkat.

Or something."

BEHOLD, THE TWI THAT TAKES TOO LONG TO REPLY TO REVIEW REPLIES THAT ARE ACTUALLY REVIEWS.

Or something.

The only problem with that is, you've hit the right buttons so far...

It's just my inner romantic kills the fappability. DX THE ROMANCE! I LOVE IT, BUT IT HURTS ME SO! In that way, it is a sign of quality; you've made something that's not 'OMFG YOU! OMFG ME! *SEX*' enough that I can't fap to it. DX

But alas, I feel as though I'm rambling again. :P

Hmm. Come to think of it... what story of yours do you plan on updating next? I can't seem to find anywhere that you've said...

...But that might just be me being incompetent again. XD

GAAARGGG!!! I'm sorry I didn't review ASAP! With school and everything, I almost completely forgot about the story! :(

Anyways, even though this was non-canonical to teh story, it still fits in so nicely. You did a great job again. I love the lollipop idea, that's hot... And I still love those "oh snap" moments (which can be easily foretold, such as when Slash began talking about how to get to the gum in the blow-pop :P). The Q+A stuff was short, but funny (the motherfucking Bahamas roflmao...). I can't wait for the next oneshot later, and more importantly, the next chapter of Sinners. Keep up the good work!

P.S. To the saguaro cactus comment: fucking...ow...>_>