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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I loved the fiction, but one thing that struck me.. it's Tootsie Roll Pops that that phrase was coined for, not Blow Pops. XD That small thing aside, I did enjoy it, and it was very... unique. Candy play! Keep up the good work!
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Magi Kavin---I know. As I mentioned in one of the earlier review responses, I just wanted blow pops cuz THEY'RE FUCKING DELICIOUS, but the Tootsie Pop line was better.
Incidentally, I almost decided against the idea when it came to me. I thought to myself, "candy fucking? lol they're never gonna buy this". But apparently the people here are just as perverted as me, so HEH.
So yes. How many licks does it take to get to the center of a Gardevoir? LET'S FIND OUT.
A-one, a-two, a-three...
*orgasm*
Three.
Incidentally, I almost decided against the idea when it came to me. I thought to myself, "candy fucking? lol they're never gonna buy this". But apparently the people here are just as perverted as me, so HEH.
So yes. How many licks does it take to get to the center of a Gardevoir? LET'S FIND OUT.
A-one, a-two, a-three...
*orgasm*
Three.
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
About that line candy fucking? lol they're never gonna buy this in my stories i've often used and expanding dildo which you can use in any of your stories if you can think up a reason why it would exist I always just say magic or something like that
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
First off, the requisite 'you are a golden god' comments. Seriously, though, if you stop writing, I think the number of depression-based suicides will triple or something.
Now for a funny comment.
"Mr. Slash, how many licks does it take to get to the center of a Gardevoir?"
"I never made it without cumming, ask Mr. Pants Python."
"One, two-ooh, th-three -Aaah!- three."
Yeah, just stole your joke, but had to say it anyways.
With Christmas just around the corner, I'm wondering just what sort of devilishly adorable set-up you'll go with. I see a snowball fight, with Psymakio using her Psy powers to epic effect, then when they go inside to warm up... Well, they get plenty warmed up.
Not sure if Christmas itself would work, or if you'd want to Poke-fy it a little. Maybe something like Jirachimas? Slash and Psymakio could get a bit of fun out of celebrating the enemies' holiday in their own sexiful way.
Regardless, since you're writing it, it will be incredible. Not to put pressure on you or anything. Or is it?
(Fairy Psymakio is cute, but the little Devil Gardevoir in my head is kyewt too... The little wings, and pointed tail, maybe a pitchfork and either bat wing ears or horns, kyaah!)
Now for a funny comment.
"Mr. Slash, how many licks does it take to get to the center of a Gardevoir?"
"I never made it without cumming, ask Mr. Pants Python."
"One, two-ooh, th-three -Aaah!- three."
Yeah, just stole your joke, but had to say it anyways.
With Christmas just around the corner, I'm wondering just what sort of devilishly adorable set-up you'll go with. I see a snowball fight, with Psymakio using her Psy powers to epic effect, then when they go inside to warm up... Well, they get plenty warmed up.
Not sure if Christmas itself would work, or if you'd want to Poke-fy it a little. Maybe something like Jirachimas? Slash and Psymakio could get a bit of fun out of celebrating the enemies' holiday in their own sexiful way.
Regardless, since you're writing it, it will be incredible. Not to put pressure on you or anything. Or is it?
(Fairy Psymakio is cute, but the little Devil Gardevoir in my head is kyewt too... The little wings, and pointed tail, maybe a pitchfork and either bat wing ears or horns, kyaah!)
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Great job Slash.You are spoiling us ;)
Too bad we don't celebrate Halloween where I live , it seems to be so fun.
Too bad we don't celebrate Halloween where I live , it seems to be so fun.
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November 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fluffy_lover---I might be spoiling everyone in the next month or two with Sinners chapters, heheh.
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Bloody magnificent one-shot. Too bad we didn't get to see what Gardevoir did for Slash.
Can't wait for the continuation of Sinners.
Can't wait for the continuation of Sinners.
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
CrazyIvan---Gardevoir should be in Smash Brothers Brawl, with her ultimate move being getting naked. Or something.
Imasuky Lomae---Nothing helps me sleep. There are things that get me tired, but tired and sleepy are distinctly different, sigh.
Negativety101---It must be horrible with the 500+ reviews on Sinners, lol. Maybe AFF should implement some sort of page system, with maybe 30-50 reviews on one page. If ever you want to leave me a review, but can't load/access the page, you can always e-mail me, heh.
Gardevoir's costume...at first I was trying to think of something good and symbolic for her, like Slash being a pirate...but then realized that, at her current stage of cultural knowledge, would probably just pick something cute and shiny, lol.
Incidentally, if the pirate ship's a-rocking, don't come a-knocking.
And speaking of Watson...things are be fun with him in the next couple chapters of Sinners. ^_^
Imasuky Lomae---Heh, I'm not really a foot fetishist myself, but my writing knows no bounds, so we'll see, lol.
Anon---HINT: She had more than one thing to suck on. :-O
Chapter 17 of Sinners is slated for mid-November. :3
Imasuky Lomae---Nothing helps me sleep. There are things that get me tired, but tired and sleepy are distinctly different, sigh.
Negativety101---It must be horrible with the 500+ reviews on Sinners, lol. Maybe AFF should implement some sort of page system, with maybe 30-50 reviews on one page. If ever you want to leave me a review, but can't load/access the page, you can always e-mail me, heh.
Gardevoir's costume...at first I was trying to think of something good and symbolic for her, like Slash being a pirate...but then realized that, at her current stage of cultural knowledge, would probably just pick something cute and shiny, lol.
Incidentally, if the pirate ship's a-rocking, don't come a-knocking.
And speaking of Watson...things are be fun with him in the next couple chapters of Sinners. ^_^
Imasuky Lomae---Heh, I'm not really a foot fetishist myself, but my writing knows no bounds, so we'll see, lol.
Anon---HINT: She had more than one thing to suck on. :-O
Chapter 17 of Sinners is slated for mid-November. :3
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November 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Something i just thought about i was looking up Gardevoir hentai and i couldn't help but think what sexy littlie feet Gardevoir have so maybe in a one shot there could be some foot fetish stuff because there's not nearly enough on the site.
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
P.s. Part of what got me thinking about that was when Psymakio talked about her fet hurting if i'd been slash iwould have given her a foot rub. :)
With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae
P.s. Part of what got me thinking about that was when Psymakio talked about her fet hurting if i'd been slash iwould have given her a foot rub. :)
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I NEVER SAID ANYTHING ABOUT A TURKEY LEG!!! I suggested Psymakio in an apron, no turkey leg, that shit's disgusting. Why cant there be a fluffy one-shot, like how Sinners was before the sex. That's what I was thinking of!