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Imasuky Lomae---I know, Flower's death made me cry, too. I hope Zaphod finds someone new soon...HE DESERVES HAPPINESS DAMMIT

Tyrant---I think the Christmas one will be a lot longer than this one. There's a lot more cutesy stuff that can happen then...hot chocolate and walks in the winter and the like.

If you (or anyone) wants to send me pics or anything, don't forget you can all e-mail me at slashfirestorm@inbox.com, anytime! :shameless plug for the sinners mailing list:

Imasuky Lomae---Any girl who comes to my house will have to deal with a bored, post-lemon-writing Slash wielding lollipops. We can all guess what would happen then, ohoho.

Incidentally, chapter 17-19 of Sinners (kind of a mini-arc for Arc 2) are completely planned and production will begin quite soon.

monkeygodlance---It was because you mentioned Thanksgiving, and I was thinking of things I could do for such a oneshot, lol. Now, Gardevoir in an apron could happen maybe if Slash gets sick (a potential storyline for a oneshot I've been mulling over)...

Black Whole---Well, remember that a good deal of my reviews are my responses...plus, since Sinners is a very popular work and has a lot of fans, they're more inclined to give this derivative oneshot a read than some totally new story, heh. The review rate will drop off as the story slides off the page.

I hate candy. I mean, I love eating it (and fucking fuck, would I love to lollipop a female with it), but it hurts my teeth and keeps me awake all night. So I hate it...AND YET, I LOVE IT :-(

I'm pretty sure the next oneshot will be Christmas, although it'll probably be shown as some winter festival that's similar to Christmas (no Christianity in Hoenn). I might make a New Year's one too, if I can write it really fast. Plus there's the bondage idea that's been floating in my head. I think I'll call that one "Always Have A Safe Word" or something, lol.

Hello it is me. I'm reviewing from my Wii here. I'll keep this short.
Alright, a good pointless smut. Nothing more nothing less. Good job.

I also have problems with candy but in my case it's more or less that i'll eat like ten bags in one sitting or a gallon of ice cream with three kinds of syrup half a jar of cherries some sweet coffee powder mix a couple handfuls of cereal some cookies and a glass of sugar milk. And the funny thing is it actually puts me to sleep

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Let me just mention one thing before I get to the review. For some reason my computer does not have an easy time loading the review page once it gets enough on it. So I have not been commenting on Sinners like I would have liked to. Heck I don't even remember for sure if I used this alias. I was the guy who mentioned the Books in the library in Daimond.
Anyways the reveiw. Too damn cute. I had a fun time picturing Psymyako in her costume. And of course their was candy... Sweet sweet candy. Interesting to see Slash's romatic streak with his discription of pirates. Even if pirates were to exist and the two leads relationship accepted I can see one problem. The pirates would have to ask them to keep it down at night. As for Watson, he seems to be like the cool grandpa or uncle. He's had a lot of life experences and has learned from them. It makes him a very interesting charecter in this.

Luminous Dark---Glad you liked it, heh. The "plot" came to me a mere 48 hours before it was due, so I had to rush, lol.

Imasuky Lomae---AHAHAHA slowpoke

The reason I decided to scrap what I originally had and start over with the lollipop plot was because it was so damned cute...Gardevoir might be adult in terms of maturity and physiology, but she's still like a little kid in regards to practical applications. This plot allowed for cuteness, bonding (even if it's not canon), and, of course, lollipop goodness.

Incidentally, while "How Many Licks" refers to the old Tootsie Roll Pop commercial with the owl, the use of blow pops was intentional...because ol' Slashy, he FUCKING LOVES BLOW POPS. Ever since I was in second grade, and one of the prizes in the "Goodie Jar" was a blow pop, I've been hunting for 'em ever since. And what better way to honor a childhood favorite candy than to use it to get a sexy Pokemon to orgasm?

...lol, sure hope that quote doesn't come back to haunt me. :3

Great job. You continue to write some of the best stories out there. I wish I could even have the tiniest bit of your skill. I really liked the ending part. You make Watson a great character. Great job!

Falcix---Glad you liked it. You know, when I started out, I seriously didn't think Watson would be an important character...I mean, in the games I didn't really care too much about Mauville or anything, and the gym battle wasn't particularly hard/memorable. But for some reason, I've taken a liking to the old man, and he'll be around for a while yet.

Two things

1. I'm a Slowking not a Slowpoke but if i were I'd spen a lot of time chewing on my own tail

2. Everyone who reads Sinners start Hording blowpops we can blackmail Slash into faster updates if we have the worlds supply of his favorite candy.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

Imasuky Lomae---Slowking was fucking awesome.

And yes, I'd do anything...anything...for a blow pop. Hell, I'd have a one-night-stand with a saguaro cactus (THE LARGEST CACTUS) for one.