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Yeay, the wait is over! WOOT! I love it! Dude, blowpop's are even more awesome now! But seriously, it was fun, and as always, well-written. Can't wait for the next one-shot.

monkeygodlance--Glad you liked it...I suppose the next oneshot would be the Christmas one, unless some devious ideas and/or opportunities come up before then, heheh.

Well, from I can see, I guess you have two chances, Veterans day, and Thanksgiving, which neither are that romantic originally. However, if you tried, you could probably think of something. I wouldn't mind reading about Psymakio in an apron. Just trying to help.

Heh. Nice oneshot. Had a few chuckle-tastic moments...

...But I still can't find it in me to fap to it. DX

Ah well. I guess you could call it a sign of quality, or something. Or you could just call me weird. Either one works. :P

Hello, and this is the Random Reviewer, coming to review this story. Actually, now that I look at it, it's only a oneshot....oh the hell with it. This piece combines the thrill of trick-or-treating(which I still do, thank you xD), SEX thanks to a lollipop, and a bit of comedy at the very end. Watson is so awesome, no doubt about that.

HOWEVER my favorite part was the VERY end with the Q and A section. That was so funny, I fell out of my chair, which fell onto me. It was painful, but my goodness that was hilarious. Random Reviewer, AWAY!

~Random Reviewer

It's times like these I wish I wasn't such a candy addict.. >.> Moving on...

Now, I'm sure everyone else has said it enough, but this is one kickass story. Sure, it was a oneshot, but it was awesome! Especially Watson at the end...that was so funny.

Well, I would say more, but my hand is currently busy at the moment...lol It is VERY hard to type with one hand, if you know what I mean. lol

Meh, I can't think of anything else to say. Now, back to fapping...lol

KABOOM!

I wish i could get my girl to do that.
:(
She's stubborn.

Very good story.

Don’t do a Thanksgiving one-shot that’s the whiteman’s holiday an as a Native American I can’t approve of that holiday and just about the only thing you could do in a story like that involves a turkey leg and as kinky as I am that’s just kinda gross on second thought I’d almost like to see that

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae

monkeygodlance---I don't think either of those days would work. Besides, using a lollipop is a hell of a lot hotter than a turkey leg. O_O;

As the main story goes on and the relationship is clarified, I bet I can make a oneshot where the two of them are married, a la "I Love Lucy" or something, heheh...

GARDEVOIR, YOU GOT SOME SPLAININ' TO DO

Twi---One of these days, I'll find the right fetish and you'll be fapping like a fucking meerkat.

Or something.

Incidentally, I'm still crying over Mozart (MM fans, I'm sure you are too)...WHY DID SHE HAVE TO DIE!?!?

RR---Trick or treating is fun, although the past few years I've been the chump who stays behind to hand out candy. But I declare, if I had a blow pop and a lady with an open mind...heh. Heheh. Yeah...

I put in the Q+A when I was reading over the first draft and realized "oh fuck, where are the other Pokemon?" I tried to think of various locations/explanations for where they could be, but then decided it'd detract from the story and just ignore them. Heh, just a oneshot...a few plot-holes are allowed. :3

Black Whole---Yes, I love making her so cute (but, at the same time, not some damsel-in-distress wuss character)...and so sexy, heh. I HAVE A FEELING THEY'LL GO BLOW POP HUNTING LIKE CRAZY FROM NOW ON

My costume was some generic skull-robe thing. Bleh. I got ravaged by mosquitoes, too. asdfsafd

The storing of blow pops may speed up my writing, especially if females allow me to do...sugary experiments. :-O

ThatGuy---Oh fuck, last night was horrible for me. Not Halloween itself, but the sugar. I hadn't eaten a lot of sugary stuff at once in a long time (my teeth hurt when I do)...so I forgot about how badly it fucked up my sleep schedule. I was hyper-exhausted, but because I was only tired, not sleepy, I was up the whole night. Didn't get to sleep til like 7 in the morning, bleh.

I like Watson too. I prefer his character to not be the stereotypical dirty-old-man, but to more of a...knowledgeable and open-minded veteran, heh.

And hey, what a coincidence, I typed the story with one hand, too! :-O

Fogu-s_Tofu---I wish I had a girl, and then I'd wish for her to let me do that, lol.

Imasuky Lomae---Incidentally, I've always viewed Slash as having Native American roots...or rather, an appropriate Hoenn equivalent. I don't know if it'll ever come up in the story itself, but I often make lots of details for characters that aren't ever explicitly seen, although they still make up a part of their personality.

In any case, candy is hotter than them fucking in a vat of mashed potatoes or something, lol.

More than Mozart I’m reeling from the loss of Flower I first found out after waking up from a nap I couldn’t sleep at all for the rest of the night but Rocketdog seems to be doing okay.

With Eternal Love, Imasuky Lomae