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Okay, finding GOOD ExT smut is fairly difficult, so this is heaven sent. The build-up and the foreplay is really fun to read in this fic, no joke. And I always thought that if Eriol and Tomoyo were to have sex and whatnot, this is what they were going to be like. Please, please update. :)

WOw!
This is amazing. Are you planning on continuing it? Please please~!

so when are you updating?

Do post the next chapter :p Can't Wait to read ^^

Hooray! I found a good story! I'm very interested in how this pans out, and it's my first attempt at reading an Eriol/Tomoyo too! You are a very good writer, (love the smut so far) and I wouldn't mind being your beta I guess (maybe I'll get off my lazy butt and get back to my writing too... shrug). However, I don't think you need one. I didn't notice any grammatical errors or anything. Everything flowed well, although the first chapter was a bit repetitive, but overall very nicely done. Looking forward to the next chapter! Teasing in public sounds like fun!