rate_review Reviews

please continue this story it is very interesting especially envy I can't wait to see what you write for the other sins

I won't beg you to stop. *L* Quite the opposite, it looks interesting. But, you need more paragraphs, everything is kinda squished and a bit hard to read. Also, rereading it might not hurt, there are a few spelling errors. *yeah, I am a bag about that.* But I think it will be very good with a bit of tweaking, the idea is solid. Or you could just ignore me, that works too. :)