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Cute commentary, very fun.  Also, nice to know you're still around.  I look forward to the next chunk.

Wonderful! I loved the movie The Labrinth and I love how you adapted the plot to fit with a Touya/Yue story!

Aww!! That was wonderful! True, some of it was... not as elegant as PS, but still... I was almost moved to tears at the end. I've only ever read one other Labyrinth (different setting) fic, and that was this spectacular Fushigi Yuugi fic starring Tamahome and Nakago (dang, why do they all turn into yaoi? It must be Jareth's tight pants, calling for the slash). I could definitely see where some maturation of the writing process had occurred, mostly during "Seduction". Not that it wasn't smoking. Mm. And you're very right, Yue was much more of a manipulative bastard in this fic. T'was refreshing.

Anyway, this fic has earned it's place in my Favorites, and was a delightful way to spend a Saturday.

I love this version of the Labyrinth, though I admit I was a little disappointed with the ending... until I got to the last line anyway. Things seem promising for our hero and his devilishly lovely villian. ^_^

Anyway, thanks for sharing this. It was a true pleasure to read.

That ending was great! Especially the part where Touya is returning to the real world "Never wanted to hurt him...he loved me..."
You could feel his sadness!
Interesting twist in the end XD
I also saw the continuation of Labyrinth in Tokyopop, just yesterday actually. I may read it now...
See you at the group!! ^_^

This was an amazing sibling piece to Pleasure Slave. I can definitely see where they influence each other and where they compliment each other and you hold true to the characters the whole time. You have an amazing grasp on complex relationships and I had a wonderful time reading the Touya/Syaoran dynamic in Labyrinth. Great work. Hope to see more from you. :D

Oh wow, I think my heart just broke when Touya refused Yue. I can see why, but still. It was still a good ending though. Semi-happy, they are still together at the end.. kind of. I would love a sequel, but you are right, it's hard! If you ever get the urge to write one though, no complaints here!

"You have no power over me." Echo, echo, echo... Ah, yes, the grand finale. Always gratifying yet saddening to see a work of art to come to an end... But, I shall preservere! Yeah, it was a little disappointing that Sakura and Syaoran never met, but, hey, nature of the beast. As it happens, there is a manga/comic sequel to Labyrinth now in existence from Tokyo Pop, Labyrinth:The Return, if you're interested. Well, until your next great epic, Laters.

I was slightly surprised that it ended this way. I've never seen The Labyrinth, so it was an all new ride for me. Thank you for updating frequently, and for being such a good author.

wow, I missed reviewing the last few chapters...since I just checked this after weeks!
the story goes on great! I like how Li realized he was a coward and came back to help, and how Kero asked Touya to give Yue a chance! But how did he know what Yue wanted with Touya??
This story has been funny in its own way, even though the situation is not given to be funny. Touya's line of "are you wearing makeup?" was priceless XD

I remember reading the part were Sakura said to Yue that having wings must be fun, and since that particular chapter was rather funny I kept stopping every few lines to comment on something (to myself, though :P) and I remember I said "Well, they certainly have their uses" and then read the line were Yue said just that!! I was laughing soooo hard, because fangirl that I am, I kept on thinking on Yue's uses to his wings XD