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Hmm, the only thing missing was Yue singing "Within Me". At least he talked Sakura out of staying, but can he reach her? I was also kinda hoping for maybe one more scene about Sakura's times in the castle prior to Touya getting there, but, oh, well. I merrily await the finale!! Laters.

Hope your lungs recover soon. I was starting to think we wouldn't get to see full Keroberos, but you managed to squeeze him in anyway, good for you! And yeah, Syaoran did kind of deserve that punch, didn't he? But at least he got to relieve some demons afters by chopping down those stocks! Hehheh. And now the final confrontation! I can't wait. Laters!

noooo, what a cliffhanger!!!!! Anyway, I hope you are feeling better!

glad you're back. :) great plot as usual.

I'm starting to wonder if Meilin got to be in this at all... Still, though, good rendition of the scene, and I liked the touch with model airplane and finally the copy of To Kill A Mockingbird finally snapping him out of it. I've actually read that myself back in High School, and I seem to recall Scout, the little girl, being the main character, and the story being hers, from her point of view. I also liked the scene with Li and his final self realization of cowardice. It'll be interesting to see how that plays out in the few remaining chapters. I merrily await #13. Laters.

I've had days like that. You know, not remembering wtf I'm doing. *sigh*

I liked this scene better than the one in PS.. but then again it was a lot more consenual than PS was. Anyway, I don't think you're screwed up for writing this first :P It's a good scene. And dammmmn, is Yue one sneaky son of a gun. Way to go!

Not bad, though not really my "cup of tea". Well, I believe next up is the "Junk Lady" scene, can't wait to see who put in that role. I happily await #12! Laters.

I'm impressed. Man, this was exactly what I was looking for. I wonder how our dear Touya-chan will react when he remembers...

ok, let me guess: someone is going to be molested on the next chapter, and it won't be sakura??? XD
Im enjoying this a lot more than if I had seen that movie :P
Yue, I love you! Dammit, I think I'm liking this side of Yue more than just the PS Yue, and that cannot be!!!
see you on next chapter!!