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for The Labyrinth

by Capitalist

person ayachan
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
yessss, I am so ready. Geez, Yue's so sneaky! First the peach and now the sister! I don't really approve of what he said to Sakura, but I'll admit that was a good move on his part :P
person ayachan
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
To Ana-chan: "Besides, you should get everything in writing"- HAHAHA, omg, that's hilarious.
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, Yue kind of seducing sweet, innocent, naive Sakura-chan, and Touya's finally bitten the peach, ooh, this will be an interesting effect. Can't wait to see who'll be taking the place of the "Junk Lady" afters. I heartily look forward to #11! Laters!
person Ranna
schedule December 12, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah! Yay, smex! Hurry, hurry, hurry! Please!
person Ana-chan
schedule December 9, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you finished the story since 2004? That's a long time ago. O.O But I'm glad it's done. It just means you'll update faster. >_< I love all your stories. I just hope my mental Luv Luv waves are getting to you. I have psychic powers you see. XD I'm so psychic I can watch ESPN in my head. Haha. But I get the feeling Touya isn't going to make it on time. Or it he does, Yue is going to be an ass to him and still not let him have his sister. Probably find some loophole. "What? Is that what I said? No, no. You totally misunderstood. Besides, you should get everything in writing."
person vix111
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
hehe, guardian beast of the archway! I guess he'd be mad at Yue for leaving him in such a boring job XD
Maybe some kero/yue funny scenes are waiting for us in this story, afterall Yue can't stay mad at him for too long.
person nmos
schedule December 8, 2007 at 12:00 AM
this is sooo weird to read after PS. I didn't think you'd be writing after you finished it, so I just checked back out of curiosity. I'm glad I did. this is actually really trippy. hehe. I feel like it's some weird version of alice in wonderland. it's really good. and interesting after reading PS.
thanks for posting this.
person ayachan
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ok thanks :) Haha, this is just too cute :) One of the things that I like about this story is the involvement of so many characters!
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Actually, I was expecting Meilin to be playing Sir Didymus, but Kero actually works better. So he's stuck in the plush toy form at night, huh? Okay, makes sense. Well, here's looking forward to #10, and hopefully a check in with Sakura to see how she's doing. Laters.
person Ranna
schedule December 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Kero-chan. What would this be without him? *happy sigh*

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