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I laughed so hard in this chapter! "He could have just asked for my number" awesome!
and the lucky feather cloak, of course XD
I'm thinking Touya won't make it in time, though.

Yep, called it, disguise, thank you! Well, I think I sense a "ballroom" dream sequence followed by an ugly old bag with huge pack o' crap on her back coming up. And possibly another check in with Sakura and Tomoyo, maybe? Nice touch with the reflection giving him away, by the by. Well, I look forward to #9! Laters.

Yue is being so nasty...heh. I love it. I've never really thought that Yue was a pathetic person, but he just gets portrayed that way all the time. "I lost Clow, my new master's a twit, nobody cares about me." You know. I just think that he was way out of familiar territory and feeling really abused, and so was either really nasty or painfully surprized. I love him though.

I'm actually a bit surprised that Yue... err. Yuki, lol, told him all that stuff when they were down there! Well, I'm not really surprised about the laybrinth, but the whole "searching for true love" thing. I just don't see Yue admitting that to anyone. I think PS Yue is better though. Maybe I'm just not getting the feel of this story, but PS Yue was cooler and scarier at the beginning (haha, it's different later when he's fighting to Touya :P), or maybe I'm just not seeing Yue enough in this story to fully develope an opinion of him yet. So what are you doing to this story? I mean, do you go back and do some slight editing/proofreading to this story and then post it, so it stays close to the original, or are you getting some new ideas and so therefore changing bits and chunks of it as you go along? Anyway, loving it so far ^^

Yay, finally caught up! And good ol' Yukito, lol. Great story! I can't wait to see what happens next!

Yukito doesn't have wings in this story, or at least no wings were mentioned as being on him in chapter 7. Take a closer look, please, Vix111.

scorpinac, I swear I thought that he'd fallen off and the other one had catched him in the air, flying :P
It seems I wasn't really paying attention this time around

Hmm, and now the big question - is Yukito a separate being from Yue? Or is Yue being sneaky again? Well, looking forward to #8. Laters.

Yue probably wouldn't kill Ruby...They've probably got some kind of contract, because I don't see Yue letting someone like that in there without something to make her behave. And while Yue is a meddlesome bastard, I think he'd take a contract with another magical creature seriously. If she had actually done something to Toya though...

well, I guess you really meant that he didnt lose the wings for even one second XD
Sneaky Yue! He made Touya STARE! LMAO! Yukito with wings is the sexiest thing since Yue and only because he doesn't appear with them as often as Yue. I think that for him to stand both Ruby Moon and Spinel Sun, or he either cares for them (in that same way he cares for Li XD) or he just can't get rid of them, those little pests. It'd be fun if he was sort-of-friends with Ruby and they fight over Touya.
Yukito and Ruby would totally be best girl-friends, though XD